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Thurston Photography
Posts: 29
Williston, Vermont, US


Hey all! I was wondering what you all thought about this image? I am open to critique and would love to hear what you guys have to say. (I know there is only a light in one of the eyes, BUT other then that...) https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/72223_325840820863127_1206119472_n.jpg
Jan 07 13 08:56 am  Link  Quote 
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NewBoldPhoto
Posts: 4,897
PORT MURRAY, New Jersey, US


Thurston Photography wrote:
Hey all! I was wondering what you all thought about this image? I am open to critique and would love to hear what you guys have to say. (I know there is only a light in one of the eyes, BUT other then that...) https://sphotos-a.xx.fbcdn.net/hphotos-ash3/72223_325840820863127_1206119472_n.jpg

Honestly- get rid of this image. The point of highest contrast is the one speck of a light in one eye. The composition is a fail (Google: rule of thirds ). The poor girl has raccoon eyes and ratty haystack hair- have some respect for your model. The dress is all contorted and lumpy looking and the whole thing looks hazy and underexposed.
sorry but no - just remove it and we will pretend it never happened.

Jan 08 13 07:48 pm  Link  Quote 
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AlyssaMichelle Photo
Posts: 512
Lake Forest, California, US


NewBoldPhoto wrote:

Honestly- get rid of this image. The point of highest contrast is the one speck of a light in one eye. The composition is a fail (Google: rule of thirds ). The poor girl has raccoon eyes and ratty haystack hair- have some respect for your model. The dress is all contorted and lumpy looking and the whole thing looks hazy and underexposed.
sorry but no - just remove it and we will pretend it never happened.

+1

Jan 14 13 05:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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