Of the first ten, I like this one best. I think it would be better if not cropped so close to her head (the more space above her the better I think for this one).
There is lots to like about this one, but her legs are way to bright relative to everything else in the scene. The light on her face is good, but seems dark relative to the skirt and legs and therefore my eyes are drawn to her overexposed legs.
I like the post processing on the black and white converstion above, but in general (the rest of the group of 10 shots), the post processing is too much for my taste. Too contrasty.
I much prefer the post processing of this one. In fact, this is my favourite of your whole portfolio. It's lovely.
I hope that's helpful.