Your current portfolio is not large, but has a wide range of quality.
This has a fantastic smile and interesting composition and setting.
This smile looks forced, especially compared to the photo above. I expected to see a caption reading My First Photoshoot or something similar with this one. Not sure why you like this one.
Lovely dress, nice light, good pose and expression. This is a keeper for sure.
Then there is this. I like the dress, but the rest of this image including the pose, setting, colours (epecially the red), lighting and retouching are clearly inferior to the one above.
I really like the expression and direct connection with the camera, but everything else about this photo is quite poor. I would ditch this and reshoot it under better conditions.
Not bad, but doesn't compare to the first one above!
I like this one except for the tension in your expression - particularly in the mouth.
I think this is the best of this series of photos (you on the bed). Nice colours, flattering lighting and pleasant composition.
This one shows your legs well, but that is all it has going for it. Replace it with a better full body photo.
I would recommend trimming your port down to the best four photos (#1, 5, 10, 6) and build up from there. Oh, I guess keep #2 as your full body shot too.
Beautiful face and a killer natural smile! I would love to shoot with you.
I hope that is helpful.