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Photographer
MC OConnor
Posts: 68
Asbury Park, New Jersey, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3757fdc951_m.jpg


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f378ed01873_m.jpg


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3762329195_m.jpg
Jan 14 13 03:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AlyssaMichelle Photo
Posts: 512
Lake Forest, California, US


They are good, but the editing was done strange.
What are you shooting with?
The framing is a bit odd as well, but overall, they are okay, nothing that makes me say wow
Jan 14 13 04:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,669
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3757fdc951_m.jpg
The over effect is face looks over exposed
Your choice of lighting is highlighting the bags under the models eyes
Over all a distracting background, there is nice background blur, but the colors are too bold

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f378ed01873_m.jpg
Same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Best pose and composition

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130113/19/50f3762329195_m.jpg
Get rid of the bricks by cropping off left side of photo and this would be a better background
Again same issue looks like you over exposed the area around the eyes and forehead
Over all appearance is very flat lighting
Jan 21 13 02:09 am  Link  Quote 
Model
ksn modeling
Posts: 24
Tarrytown, New York, US


The second shot is my favorite!
Jan 21 13 09:08 am  Link  Quote 
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