#2- nice edit
#3- most of the lighting is a tad too harsh for her, and some of the images have funky shadows on her nose. Stick with Rembrandt, or butterfly IMO
#4- unless you really need to, don't shoot from below. Especially with a model that has a rounder face. It just isn't flattering.
#5 - wardrobe and makeup are nice
#6- pick your favorite 3 and ditch the rest. I was intreagued at first but quickly lost interest after seeing a few flaws mentioned above.
Overall, decent work, but could be improved upon!