I like the expression.

Quality is solid,

The idea for the hair is great,

but I don't think it works with the expression.

But as always with art, it could very well speak to someone one else.

Thanks for the reply.

I think it would be better, and have more life in color.

B&W works better... Your color images seem to tilt toward too much yellow...

Just my opinion.

I would like to see more of hair blowing hair.  It seems to be the point of the image, but it is being cut off.  I like her gaze.