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Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Post an image (or link)
I'll write a concise
verse in the ancient form of
five, seven, five beats


Later today, 16 Jan 2013, I'll write a 5-7-5 poem commenting on your image
Jan 16 13 07:57 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Jojo West
Posts: 972
Silver Spring, Maryland, US


Jan 16 13 09:48 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
L Raye
Posts: 5,000
Petaluma, California, US


Jan 16 13 10:04 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Alivia Autumn
Posts: 610
Albuquerque, New Mexico, US


Sure pick one that inspires you smile
Jan 16 13 10:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,256
Los Angeles, California, US


I'm a sucker for poetry.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130116/11/50f6fcad4bf93.jpg
Jan 16 13 03:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 813
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


This...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/15/50db89f9bdd78.jpg
Jan 16 13 04:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


anticipation,
dressing up, going out, then
all alone: after

Jan 17 13 06:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


the burden of the
sandstone sculpture eroding
in breeze and drizzle

Jan 17 13 06:06 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Alivia Autumn wrote:
Sure pick one that inspires you smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130115/13/50f5c4a0b5aac_m.jpg


repose on rich cloth
dispel defense- that stalwart
of studied languor

Jan 17 13 06:13 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Jorge Kreimer wrote:
I'm a sucker for poetry.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130116/11/50f6fcad4bf93.jpg

sold as glamour, a
prison that poisons, seduced
by tobacco smoke

Jan 17 13 06:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


TDSImages wrote:
This...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/15/50db89f9bdd78.jpg

after the effort
of dressing and posing, sit
exhausted, expired

Jan 17 13 06:18 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Anyone else?
Jan 17 13 06:18 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Egle Aida Damulyte
Posts: 374
Vilnius, Vilniaus, Lithuania


Jan 17 13 06:24 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120806/09/501ff016280da_m.jpg

jaded too young, stares
in cool appraisal- years past-
spectral enchantress

Jan 17 13 06:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,256
Los Angeles, California, US


Light Writer wrote:
sold as glamour, a
prison that poisons, seduced
by tobacco smoke

Thanks!

If you are in the mood for another... wink

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31003846 18+

Jan 17 13 09:23 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,571
New York, New York, US


Jan 17 13 09:31 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
EdwardKristopher
Posts: 3,353
Tempe, Arizona, US


Hmmmmm...  :-)

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111012/23/4e968b07f0a8c.jpg
Jan 17 13 05:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 813
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Light Writer wrote:

after the effort
of dressing and posing, sit
exhausted, expired

NICE...thank you!!!

Jan 17 13 06:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Bob Elliott Artist
Posts: 29
Rockville Centre, New York, US


Are you game for a drawing?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130111/06/50f028a7c57c2_m.jpg
Jan 18 13 07:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


rituals surround
the contained heart kept distanced
ceremonious

Jan 19 13 06:45 am  Link  Quote 
Model
winking_wonder
Posts: 5,571
New York, New York, US


Light Writer wrote:

rituals surround
the contained heart kept distanced
ceremonious

I like! smile

Jan 21 13 05:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Amul La La
Posts: 804
Plymouth, England, United Kingdom


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120825/10/503906a5b7785_m.jpg



If you'd like to, I'd like this one (;
Jan 22 13 04:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


Love this thread. I woul like to play with my avatar.
Jan 23 13 02:54 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,097
Crowley, Texas, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Me please big_smile
Jan 23 13 06:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


EdwardKristopher wrote:
Hmmmmm...  :-)

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111012/23/4e968b07f0a8c.jpg

studied arts observed
at a distance remain so
unembraceable

Jan 23 13 06:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Bob Elliott Artist wrote:
Are you game for a drawing?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130111/06/50f028a7c57c2_m.jpg

abstract reminder
of intimacies exposed
displayed swanning form

Jan 23 13 06:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


A M U L wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120825/10/503906a5b7785_m.jpg



If you'd like to, I'd like this one (;

barbed tenderness a
bold leap defies, yet leaves white
geldings denied- dress

Jan 23 13 06:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


_eMMe_ wrote:
Love this thread. I woul like to play with my avatar.

light filters upon
secrets withheld-  mysteries
which shadows support

Jan 23 13 06:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Me please big_smile

unruled strands falling-
masked eyes cast longing looks-
hidden hands at play

Jan 23 13 06:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


three minutes and a
lifetime of experience
make quick work of art
Jan 23 13 06:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
EdwardKristopher
Posts: 3,353
Tempe, Arizona, US


Light Writer wrote:

studied arts observed
at a distance remain so
unembraceable

Thank you so much!  :-)

Jan 23 13 08:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Shatter Leaf
Posts: 469
Houston, Texas, US


http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af32/thebeginning88/_MG_9763-EDIT-sm_zps5d2bc7c3.jpg


Self portrait, would be cool to have a haiku smile
Jan 24 13 04:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dcsmooth
Posts: 1,163
Detroit, Michigan, US


Jan 25 13 06:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


Shatter Leaf wrote:
http://i991.photobucket.com/albums/af32/thebeginning88/_MG_9763-EDIT-sm_zps5d2bc7c3.jpg


Self portrait, would be cool to have a haiku smile

before appearing
outside- preparations done-
recovered- alone

Jan 25 13 07:51 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Light Writer
Posts: 18,387
Oakland, California, US


dcsmooth wrote:
This one, please.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21822351  18+

rigid rules inform
behavior's inhibitions-
strictly human hearts

Jan 25 13 07:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
A M Y B
Posts: 127
Providence, Rhode Island, US


I'd like to play! Feel free to poke through my port smile
Jan 25 13 07:58 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Amul La La
Posts: 804
Plymouth, England, United Kingdom


Light Writer wrote:

barbed tenderness a
bold leap defies, yet leaves white
geldings denied- dress

Thank you (beautuful)

(;

Jan 26 13 05:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dcsmooth
Posts: 1,163
Detroit, Michigan, US


Light Writer wrote:

rigid rules inform
behavior's inhibitions-
strictly human hearts

Thanks!  That is awesome!

Jan 26 13 02:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MidnightSun Designs
Posts: 337
WINSTON SALEM, North Carolina, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130127/09/510567044fcae_m.jpg
Jan 31 13 02:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121129/11/50b7b5bc4218a_m.jpg
Jan 31 13 03:22 pm  Link  Quote 
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