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John Roeland
Posts: 5
Vianen, Utrecht, Netherlands


Always progressing and looking for improvement. What are my best pictures and which one should I skip (and why).

Thanks in advance!
Jan 16 13 03:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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The Effective Image
Posts: 3,554
Lansing, Michigan, US


Look at your view counts. Your dark images (the ones with little lighting) are getting views from visitors who probably can't figure out what they are from the thumbnail versions. Your most 'popular' image is the one with the most female skin showing.

Sex sells... sex gets attention... just the way it is.

Without your definition of what your criteria for 'best' is... it's impossible to say which image is the 'best'.

Just my opinion.
Jan 16 13 07:05 pm  Link  Quote 
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DanaBarrett Photography
Posts: 1,023
Franklin, Tennessee, US


Your images are kind of all over the place.  Maybe think about what area you want to focus and move your portfolio there. 

I have no problem telling you what I think are your best and weakest images in my humble opinion. 

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/08/50a66d034b824_m.jpg
This is my favorite.  I want to know what he is thinking.  He engages my attention.  If I was a horny boy I would have picked one of your body shots, but I'm not, so I pick this.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121116/06/50a64853df899_m.jpg
I think this is your weakest.  what the heck are you doing to her.  At least her stiff body and odd expression are saying that.  I don't really think that's the impression you want people to get of you. 

just my opinion, best wishes
Jan 16 13 11:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
John Roeland
Posts: 5
Vianen, Utrecht, Netherlands


Thanks for the feedback.
Jan 21 13 12:36 am  Link  Quote 
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