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Raquel Rayne
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New York, New York, US


DONE. Thank you! smile

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A http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31322378 That was easy, Thank you lovelies!

ETA:

Ok and now between these two, pretty please big_smile

C http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31322427

or

D http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31322426
Jan 16 13 09:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MKPhoto
Posts: 5,665
Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada


A

delete B and don't show to anybody ever again wink
Jan 16 13 09:45 pm  Link  Quote 
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ReLe Photography
Posts: 61
Columbia, South Carolina, US


I'm not sure if there is a mood or feel you were going for, but I choose A.  IMO, it is a more sensual shot.  Very lovely.  B, on the other hand, has a weird vibe, due in no small part to your expression and your body language. 

For the second set:  D.  Pretty much the same ideas as above, although it is more the lack of seeing your face that kills C for me.  Your expression makes D so much better!

Hope this helped!

Reese
Jan 16 13 09:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
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Washington, District of Columbia, US


MKPhoto wrote:
A

delete B and don't show to anybody ever again wink

Jan 16 13 09:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Raquel Rayne
Posts: 1,186
New York, New York, US


Thanks!
Jan 16 13 09:47 pm  Link  Quote 
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SPV Photo
Posts: 789
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


D
Jan 16 13 09:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


C
Jan 16 13 10:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DanaBarrett Photography
Posts: 1,030
Franklin, Tennessee, US


d:

c has an odd crop for the image in my opinion.  love your expression with d.
Jan 16 13 10:43 pm  Link  Quote 
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Paige Morgan
Posts: 4,058
New York, New York, US


D is awesome. Good lines in pose, strong expression.


C is kind of "meh" to me...and looks almost accidental, like they caught you between poses.
Jan 16 13 10:49 pm  Link  Quote 
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RachelReilly
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Washington, District of Columbia, US


D
Jan 17 13 04:49 am  Link  Quote 
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William Kious
Posts: 8,841
Delphos, Ohio, US


From an artistic standpoint, I would go with C. The mood you evoke seems more fitting to the location.

Image D really shows off your figure, but your expression just doesn't seem to suit the setting.

I say C.
Jan 17 13 05:00 am  Link  Quote 
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Anna Adrielle
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Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium


I actually don't think you have to choose between C or D, I think the images are different enough to have both smile

one is not better than the other, they're just different
Jan 17 13 05:03 am  Link  Quote 
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Jeffrey M Fletcher
Posts: 4,344
Asheville, North Carolina, US


I also like both C and D. Use either, or both, they're good.
Jan 17 13 05:29 am  Link  Quote 
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MKPhoto
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Winnipeg, Manitoba, Canada


I like the voyeuristic appeal of both, C more so than D. D is too joyful to be dark or to dark to be joyful, IMO. while C strikes the balance. D has some composition issues, too.

PS. Please take my comment on "B" with a smiley and grain of salt.
Jan 17 13 05:36 am  Link  Quote 
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Aaron Lewis Photography
Posts: 5,083
Catskill, New York, US


Both C and D are great photos. If I had to choose I'd have to like C better for the same voyeuristic and or candid reason. It is cropped a little oddly but I still like it
Jan 17 13 06:33 am  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Bob Elliott Artist
Posts: 29
Rockville Centre, New York, US


D
The cropping of part of your body in C seems less than effective.
Jan 17 13 11:22 am  Link  Quote 
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Raquel Rayne
Posts: 1,186
New York, New York, US


Hmm. I am still torn, as are the replies!
Jan 17 13 11:55 am  Link  Quote 
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Nor-Cal Photography
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Walnut Creek, California, US


Raquel Rayne wrote:
Hmm. I am still torn, as are the replies!

Then why did you delete C ?????????????????????????

Jan 17 13 04:44 pm  Link  Quote 
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Keila Sone
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Harrison, New Jersey, US


A
Jan 17 13 05:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Raquel Rayne
Posts: 1,186
New York, New York, US


Nor-Cal Photography wrote:

Then why did you delete C ?????????????????????????

Haha, touche.

I finally chose!

Thank you all, I can be very indecisive.

Jan 17 13 08:55 pm  Link  Quote 
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