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Ace Fillmore
Posts: 28
Los Angeles, California, US


I would really appreciate honest constructive criticism of my of my portfolio from Professional photographers, models, hair & Mua etc.... I m at a roadblock with my photography career. I m primarily a filmmaker and have a clear direction of where i m going with that but photography i m not really sure what path i m on. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated
Jan 17 13 02:50 am  Link  Quote 
Makeup Artist
D Barreau MUA
Posts: 4
New York, New York, US


I've been a MUA for 3 years and I think your port is amazing. Keep up the great work!
Jan 17 13 12:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ace Fillmore
Posts: 28
Los Angeles, California, US


Thank you
Jan 17 13 01:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ace Fillmore
Posts: 28
Los Angeles, California, US


bump
Jan 19 13 10:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
David Kirk
Posts: 4,309
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


I find your portfolio to be all over the place.

Some photos are simple and effective - well lit and well executed in terms of post work.  Seems like you have a good grasp on communicating visually.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/14/50f4844918b66_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120614/16/4fda6fe56fa17_m.jpg


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120614/16/4fda6fbd1491a_m.jpg

Then there is this which seems completely incoherent to me.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120802/10/501ab2c0a3dfe_m.jpg

And then this.  Harsh lighting, very distracting background and weird tinting.  Why place the model in a stream so she needs to gather up the dress into a ball around her hips?  If she was jumping/skpping across the stream it might work, but stopping to pose looking off into nowhere?  I am lost with what you are trying to do here.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120709/01/4ffa90eaf0738_m.jpg

Sometimes it seems you have no regard for lighting whatsoever:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130114/14/50f485179d8a2_m.jpg

This sort of post processing is way too much for my taste.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120423/20/4f961bd5e8149_m.jpg

I think you have skills, but seem somewhat unfocused in what you're doing with them.  I hope that's helpful.
Jan 20 13 04:20 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ace Fillmore
Posts: 28
Los Angeles, California, US


Love your feedback, helps me out greatly
Jan 20 13 10:59 pm  Link  Quote 
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