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Posts: 2
Atlanta, Georgia, US

I’m new and wanting serious critiques
Jan 17 13 12:41 pm  Link  Quote 
Square Jaw Photography
Posts: 363
Odenton, Maryland, US

As a model I think you have great potential. Sad the photographer decided to shoot everything in black and white. I'd love to see you in some color. He didn't light very well (if any at all.)

This image should be removed. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31305618

To me, it is extremely unflattering. Your eyes look unnatural and the angle does not compliment your face at all.

Not only is this one out of focus, but it does not compliment you either. As a photographer, I know no one is perfect, but photographers should assist models in posing gracefully to accentuate their natural beauty, and laying on your side does not usually assist in this.

Try to keep getting work TF to build your port and have a more solid foundation. Good job so far.
Jan 17 13 12:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Posts: 767
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US

I'm still new and learning, so I don't like really judging others work. But I would hire and pay and experienced photographer. Bad lighting, bad composure, unflattering poses. (I mainly put that on the photographer since you're new to this)

I actually kinda like this picture, http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 1c2c94.jpg but the door knob drives me crazy.

And as mentioned above remove those two.
Jan 17 13 01:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Posts: 2
Atlanta, Georgia, US

Thanks - will replace
Jan 18 13 09:14 am  Link  Quote 
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