I’m new and wanting serious critiques

As a model I think you have great potential. Sad the photographer decided to shoot everything in black and white. I'd love to see you in some color. He didn't light very well (if any at all.)

This image should be removed. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31305618

To me, it is extremely unflattering. Your eyes look unnatural and the angle does not compliment your face at all.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31326041
Not only is this one out of focus, but it does not compliment you either. As a photographer, I know no one is perfect, but photographers should assist models in posing gracefully to accentuate their natural beauty, and laying on your side does not usually assist in this.

Try to keep getting work TF to build your port and have a more solid foundation. Good job so far.

I'm still new and learning, so I don't like really judging others work. But I would hire and pay and experienced photographer. Bad lighting, bad composure, unflattering poses. (I mainly put that on the photographer since you're new to this)

I actually kinda like this picture, http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/13 … 1c2c94.jpg but the door knob drives me crazy.

And as mentioned above remove those two.

Thanks - will replace