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Marcus McDermott
Posts: 39
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Just added some pictures from my photo-shoot around Boston. Let me know what you guys think. Would love to hear criticism, positive and/or negative, so I can continue to improve.


Thanks!


Marcus
Jan 18 13 03:44 pm  Link  Quote 
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Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,410
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9cd35e9c15_m.jpg
Nice image, could have photographer blur the background more to make it less distracting

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/00/50dab145525fb_m.jpg
If the idea is to sell designer clothing, then the hands out of the pockets would rumple the clothing less [Crossed arms]
With short hair, some times more flattering to show just one ear

Looks like a good start
Jan 18 13 04:22 pm  Link  Quote 
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Marcus McDermott
Posts: 39
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Lee_Photography wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9cd35e9c15_m.jpg
Nice image, could have photographer blur the background more to make it less distracting

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121226/00/50dab145525fb_m.jpg
If the idea is to sell designer clothing, then the hands out of the pockets would rumple the clothing less [Crossed arms]
With short hair, some times more flattering to show just one ear

Looks like a good start

Thanks a lot. Two great ideas, will definitely keep them in mind.

Jan 18 13 05:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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Abby Hawkins
Posts: 2,002
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Ah I can't pass up a chance to talk about Boston!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9ce4533b46_m.jpg

This is a really cool shot -- my only qualm is that it's a little too processed.  Combine that with the tag and something is taken away.

You've got a lot of great potential.  Best of luck as you continue to work with photographers and build up your portfolio.  The city is packed to the brim with talent!
Jan 18 13 05:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Marcus McDermott
Posts: 39
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Abby Hawkins wrote:
Ah I can't pass up a chance to talk about Boston!

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130118/14/50f9ce4533b46_m.jpg

This is a really cool shot -- my only qualm is that it's a little too processed.  Combine that with the tag and something is taken away.

You've got a lot of great potential.  Best of luck as you continue to work with photographers and build up your portfolio.  The city is packed to the brim with talent!

Thanks a lot for the critique and kind words. Best of luck to you as well!

Jan 18 13 11:12 pm  Link  Quote 
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