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FivePhotography
Posts: 207
Des Moines, Iowa, US


I'm tossing around the idea of getting into retouching on the side (Lower end of course, I'm no professional). I did this edit for a friend and I'd like some feedback on it. What you like about it, what you don't like about it, what you would have done differently, etc. Thanks a bunch!

http://img43.imageshack.us/img43/5648/beforeaftermichaelware.jpg
Jan 20 13 01:08 pm  Link  Quote 
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Mark Salo
Posts: 8,046
Olney, Maryland, US


I like the colors, skin, and textures better in the before but that's just me.
Jan 20 13 01:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Charlene AM
Posts: 5
Lima, Ohio, US


I really like the colors in the edited version. smile
Jan 20 13 01:16 pm  Link  Quote 
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LA StarShooter
Posts: 1,773
Los Angeles, California, US


I quite like what you did. You had to deal with some highlights and you addition of smoke was cool.
Jan 20 13 01:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
FivePhotography
Posts: 207
Des Moines, Iowa, US


Yeah the smoke was the main idea he wanted. And yes the picture was very bright, luckly he supplied me with a Raw file. A JPEG wouldn't have been any fun.
Jan 20 13 01:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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FivePhotography
Posts: 207
Des Moines, Iowa, US


Mark Salo wrote:
I like the colors, skin, and textures better in the before but that's just me.

I agree that I could have made the skin colors a lot more natural.

Jan 20 13 01:26 pm  Link  Quote 
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chasecaleb
Posts: 154
Kansas City, Missouri, US


FivePhotography wrote:

I agree that I could have made the skin colors a lot more natural.

To be fair, I think that's more of a stylistic choice than a problem. It works pretty well since the whole image has a blue tint.

On the other hand, I would like to see a version halfway in between the two. Can you tone down the vignette some and bring back the detail in her arms and left as well as top (from our perspective) of her hair? I have a feeling you did that partially because of the hell that was separating her from the background though, because I'm not sure I could have done it convincingly enough. Tell your friend to shoot with the model farther away from a different colored background!

Jan 21 13 12:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Retouch007
Posts: 403
East Newark, New Jersey, US


Its nice but yes I would brush back some of the original skin.
Jan 23 13 01:58 pm  Link  Quote 
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