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Photographer
Moodscapes
Posts: 419
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


This was shot with a wide angle as the model was swinging around the pole. Do you think the lens distortion is too much? I like the sense of dynamism it creates but may be too much? Any thoughts?
Thanks
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Jan 22 13 11:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Neil Snape
Posts: 9,444
Paris, Île-de-France, France


It is part of the picture that keeps it lively.

I can't say I would have suppressed the background to white though. You have a wa shot , normally they need the decor to keep them honest.

I like the distortion, the lines shapes but don't like the cut out look.
Jan 22 13 11:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Moodscapes
Posts: 419
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Neil Snape wrote:
It is part of the picture that keeps it lively.

I can't say I would have suppressed the background to white though. You have a wa shot , normally they need the decor to keep them honest.

I like the distortion, the lines shapes but don't like the cut out look.

Thanks for that - very much appreciate the feedback. Yeah the background was a problem - bank of square windows that completely broke up the shot and drew your eye right away from the model.

Jan 23 13 12:03 am  Link  Quote 
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Shy L
Posts: 584
Burlington, Vermont, US


Her legs are tripping me out.  One looks freakishly long and the other super tiny.  The torso portion looks wonderful, though.
Jan 28 13 01:04 pm  Link  Quote 
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NicoleNudes
Posts: 3,790
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


The angle of the model is fine.

What did you do to the background though?
I'd fix that if anything. Just looks like you put a purple block on the bottom of the picture.
Jan 28 13 01:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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