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Delaney Sproles
Posts: 11
Ojai, California, US


Added some recent work . . . feeling a little stuck ...

what to do next

advice?
criticism?
opinions?
hate it?
love it?

i don't know


talk to me : )
Jan 23 13 01:21 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Martina
Posts: 16
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


I think you look prettiest in the 2nd and 4th photos smile
If I only saw those two photos I would think you're a high fashion model already.

Martina
www.modelwear.blogspot.com
Jan 23 13 01:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Delaney Sproles
Posts: 11
Ojai, California, US


awh well thank you!

that is most definitely my goal. working at it everyday!

thanks for checking out my port
Jan 23 13 02:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Coyote Creations NW
Posts: 131
Vancouver, Washington, US


The first and second images are lovely both technically and from a modeling perspective.  You have everything you need, both appearance and skills.  Keep shooting!
Jan 23 13 08:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jean Renard Photography
Posts: 2,018
Los Angeles, California, US


You have some decent shots, but not a brand or a well defined "look"

The danger of having styled images is that one can often lose the model in favor of the styling.

One of my casting directors was here and thought you "seemed" like you had a nice look but was not sure, and so would have passed.  This is a HUGE problem and will cost you jobs.  This was her favorite shot, not because of how cool the shot was, but it showcased you more than the others:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121213/12/50ca380e5f838_m.jpg

You need to focus your shots on establishing your look, less styling and concepts and more shots that show what you look like, then how you use what you have and finally what kind of emotion you can deliver.  Once you have that, then go for cool and edgy and everything else you might want to do.
Jan 24 13 03:02 am  Link  Quote 
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