You have some decent shots, but not a brand or a well defined "look"
The danger of having styled images is that one can often lose the model in favor of the styling.
One of my casting directors was here and thought you "seemed" like you had a nice look but was not sure, and so would have passed. This is a HUGE problem and will cost you jobs. This was her favorite shot, not because of how cool the shot was, but it showcased you more than the others:
You need to focus your shots on establishing your look, less styling and concepts and more shots that show what you look like, then how you use what you have and finally what kind of emotion you can deliver. Once you have that, then go for cool and edgy and everything else you might want to do.