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Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


Just had shoulder surgery this morning. Meaning I am bored. I will critique you based on items you pick below.

Salty Spitoon Critique- I'll be rough and tough. I'll give you a bad critique. Ill give you a bad critique on top of a bad critique.

Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.

Weenie Hut Jr Critique- Ill just tell you the pictures I like, and enough nice brown nosing I can stomach.

...or otherwise state a critique/question you want. Would I work with you? What industry you should do? ETC.

GO now!
Jan 25 13 07:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
NicoleNudes
Posts: 3,725
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


The Salty Spitoon Critique sounds delicious wink
Jan 25 13 07:47 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Steve Wall
Posts: 621
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Hi Samantha, could you let me know what impression you get from my profile text & photos? How do I come across? Who do you think I should be pitching to for paid work? Likewise for trade?

hard to get any distance on your own work when you're looking at it all the time

...steve
Jan 25 13 07:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Art Silva
Posts: 8,230
Santa Barbara, California, US


It's been a long tiring day so I'll go for the Weenie Hut critique...

Hope you have a speedy recovery smile
Jan 25 13 07:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
New Image Creations
Posts: 409
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada


Pass the salt!!
Jan 25 13 08:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
julia00
Posts: 57
Rochester, New York, US


wishing you a fast recovery, please feel free to critique however you feel like!
Jan 25 13 08:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
juliarabkin
Posts: 545
Rochester, New York, US


oh and this account as well wink

thank you
xo
Jan 25 13 08:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,082
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


smile

Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.

If its not pushing the friendship too much, which field can you see me entering... If any lol

Thank you, I hope you feel better soon, shoulders are tricky things.
Jan 25 13 08:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 1,872
Chicago, Illinois, US


Can I get a salty spittoon, but with a couple sprinkles of weenie to help the medicine go down?
Jan 25 13 08:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JAE
Posts: 2,035
West Chester, Pennsylvania, US


I am in the mood for a Weenie hut critique smile
Jan 25 13 08:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Boston Artist Model
Posts: 1,159
Boston, Massachusetts, US


I'll be brave and go with Salty Spitoon Critique please
Jan 25 13 08:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Fotografica Gregor
Posts: 3,973
Alexandria, Virginia, US


I wish you thorough healing and recovery

meanwhile give me whatever makes you happy by way of critique
Jan 25 13 08:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DAN CRUIKSHANK
Posts: 1,774
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


I'll take the salty one please! Hope you have a speedy recovery!
Jan 25 13 08:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


NicoleNudes wrote:
The Salty Spitoon Critique sounds delicious wink

You wanted salty...

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28829660
Why is this image here? Your port has such good imagOtes, then this, where a table crops off your foot, you're centered, and the giant flare from the wood paneling loses the image. Plus the fireplace should be on! Maybe I'm crazy because it's so listed, but to me there's others, yes, even the beardy one, that deserve that attention more so.


Otherwise that's all I got. Your port is salty and rough enough for the salty spitoon. You may enter.

Jan 25 13 08:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Bernadette Newberry
Posts: 91
Cincinnati, Ohio, US


Weenie Hut for me, please! Haha. smile
Jan 25 13 08:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


Steve Wall wrote:
Hi Samantha, could you let me know what impression you get from my profile text & photos? How do I come across? Who do you think I should be pitching to for paid work? Likewise for trade?

hard to get any distance on your own work when you're looking at it all the time

...steve

Profile text is professional, yet relaxed. I like that you have an open mind on TF. I like that you listed rates in your portfolio. While some don't, as a model it can save some of us who don't have that money some time. Rates aren't bad either honestly. But as for the rates, keep them consistent with your website, or make a reason for the discount on your page.

Also, I don't like how so many photos are in your profile. My computer is a garbage machine, and many others are like me, and it will slow down loading of your page, and could lose potential clients. I'd cut it down. Plus its too much scrolling!

As for your photos, you are good enough to where I'd pay your rates. I think your best work is your editorial work, and that story telling ability could help. On Modelmayhem pitching to models is smart, but also consider pitching to make up artists/hair stylists, and designers. Never limit rates to just one party.

Jan 25 13 09:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maria Susanti
Posts: 529
Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia


Weenie hut critique pleasee
Jan 25 13 09:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
NicoleNudes
Posts: 3,725
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Samantha Emme wrote:

You wanted salty...

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28829660
Why is this image here? Your port has such good imagOtes, then this, where a table crops off your foot, you're centered, and the giant flare from the wood paneling loses the image. Plus the fireplace should be on! Maybe I'm crazy because it's so listed, but to me there's others, yes, even the beardy one, that deserve that attention more so.


Otherwise that's all I got. Your port is salty and rough enough for the salty spitoon. You may enter.

Thanks! And I totally agree with you.
It's still up because I'm working on getting more glamour nude images before I can replace it with something else.

Jan 25 13 09:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1,141
Arcata, California, US


I'll take salty spittoon Critique please!
( By the way, I love love love that you are doing Spongebob based critiques! "I slipped on an ice cube and got covered in boo boo's! " "Boo boo's eh? I think you want that hospital!")
Jan 25 13 10:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 1,937
Los Angeles, California, US


Salty spittoon, please.
Jan 25 13 10:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Dominique Banner
Posts: 41
Victoria, British Columbia, Canada


Weenie hut. New model so need something nice for a change
Jan 25 13 10:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Cole Morrison
Posts: 3,958
Portland, Oregon, US


I need a Salty Spitoon Critique to go please.
Jan 25 13 10:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Art of the nude
Posts: 11,748
Olivet, Michigan, US


Samantha Emme wrote:
Just had shoulder surgery this morning. Meaning I am bored. I will critique you based on items you pick below.

Salty Spitoon Critique- I'll be rough and tough. I'll give you a bad critique. Ill give you a bad critique on top of a bad critique.

Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.

Weenie Hut Jr Critique- Ill just tell you the pictures I like, and enough nice brown nosing I can stomach.

...or otherwise state a critique/question you want. Would I work with you? What industry you should do? ETC.

GO now!

Whatever you feel like.  smile

Jan 25 13 10:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Miluna V
Posts: 14
Dayton, Ohio, US


Weenie hut critique, Plus what industry? smile
Jan 25 13 11:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Folly Photographe
Posts: 61
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


I already critique your port saying what was your best and worst on an other thread. Go as you feel, don't be afraid to hurt of to be kind, I can manage both.
Jan 25 13 11:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Miluna V
Posts: 14
Dayton, Ohio, US


Mistake Please delete this post
Jan 25 13 11:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


Weenie hut wiil be great, I need to know my flawless, but what work too!
Jan 26 13 12:46 am  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


Art Silva Photography wrote:
It's been a long tiring day so I'll go for the Weenie Hut critique...

Hope you have a speedy recovery smile

Thank you!

The good:

Your art nudes are ahhhmazzinnngggg

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20827118

Especially this one. Awesome location. Awesome model. Well done!


The bad:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20768446

While the location is nice, the angle could be a bit more flattering.

Jan 26 13 08:49 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Alixx Rose
Posts: 225
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Salty spitoon! Gimme your meanest..
well don't TRY to hurt my feelings..
=]
Jan 26 13 08:57 am  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


New Image Creations wrote:
Pass the salt!!

Salt it is.

Your beauty album frustrates me. SO much potential. Such good make up work. And then there's no playup of the eyes, and the lighting is flat. Also no more cropping off tops of heads! ADD some drama! Its like almost there too.

but with that said, your nude album was lovely. bring everything else to that standard

Jan 26 13 09:48 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Izebel Vivant
Posts: 14
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Me, please!  Whatever you're in the mood for!
Jan 26 13 10:11 am  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


julia00 wrote:
wishing you a fast recovery, please feel free to critique however you feel like!

Thank you!

You have a very lovely face and great eyes.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31401084
this picture needs to be uploaded a better quality. same with the others like this.

I'd love to see some high end beauty shots from you. Maybe with some bold red lipstick.

Jan 26 13 10:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 768
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Salty, spitoon sounds about right...
Jan 26 13 10:23 am  Link  Quote 
Model
julia00
Posts: 57
Rochester, New York, US


Samantha Emme wrote:

Thank you!

You have a very lovely face and great eyes.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31401084
this picture needs to be uploaded a better quality. same with the others like this.

I'd love to see some high end beauty shots from you. Maybe with some bold red lipstick.

thank you!

Jan 26 13 10:35 am  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


JuliaRabkindotcom wrote:
oh and this account as well wink

thank you
xo

I've critiqued this portfolio without change, so I'll post favorite and least favorite:

Favorite:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31003481
this shot is well balanced, well composed, with excellent lighting.


Least:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/10 … 72e9d7.jpg
While this is a good shot, it doesn't sell to me as a model. It was all I could pick lol

Jan 26 13 06:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
dd photography
Posts: 757
San Diego, California, US


HI!

Hit me hard.
Jan 26 13 06:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kess M
Posts: 8,464
Brooklyn, New York, US


salty! bunny
Jan 26 13 06:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
E e v a
Posts: 1,723
Nashville, Tennessee, US


Rik Image wrote:
smile

Weenie hut critique- This is a nice critique that will be helpful. Some good, some bad, weenie.

If its not pushing the friendship too much, which field can you see me entering... If any lol

Thank you, I hope you feel better soon, shoulders are tricky things.

Thank you!
Alright, Weenie hut it is.

Overall your port is very strong. I see good consistent lighting, good crops, good angles.  It definitely shows you have a strong talent for this. I believe you could do well in multiple genres. You could do fashion or art nudes, or switch to a sole classy glamour, and be successful.

I can't say too much in the ways of bad, but delete these two shots:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30139540 (18+)
Because it just isn't as strong and seems a port filler.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/12 … aa45f2.jpg
I remember someone else mentioning the nose being washed out. I agree with it.

Jan 26 13 06:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
narie
Posts: 102
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Weenie hut critique~

2months on MM...that being said... I have multiple images from the same shoot up right now because I can't tell which is the best, but I'd like to round it down to 1 pic per shoot... well I struggle to look at myself objectively, so feel free to axe most of my portfolio
Jan 26 13 07:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Evie Wolfe
Posts: 1,124
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom


If you have the time and inclination, I would appreciate a salty critique smile
I hope you recover soon, having had issues with a shoulder myself I know how frustrating it can be! I really hope you aren't in too much pain xx
Jan 26 13 07:30 pm  Link  Quote 
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