Just did my first studio shoot about a month ago. Only received two editted photos and did the rest myself. I am in no way a retoucher, so I am asking for critique of my skills in modeling alone. Looking for advice and constructive criticism only please.
Thanks
-Luna

This I would call an over edit
Looks like you lost the pearl necklace


Raise chin
You should be able to pose your arms so they do not add to the apparent size of your mid section


You look like you have a cold and can not breathe through your nose

For me you have a nice look, if you were to shoot with some photographers that normally work with new models I bet you could create some awesome images.

I agree. You are a pretty girl, lots of potential. This particular photographer did not do you justice. Good start though. Keep trying!

Yeah, 'pretty gal. 'over-retouch, but artsy-OK.  Hopefully that won't happen to you too often.

Do a browse search for better MM TF photogs in your area that will know how to work with YOUR strengths - EYES and FACE.