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FritzTheWonderMutt
Posts: 22
San Marcos, California, US


I have updated my pics and would like some feedback on what's working and what's not. Please be specific if you can about lighting, posing, etc.
Thanks.
Jan 28 13 06:23 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,549
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/18/51009e25c9c7d_m.jpg
I like this one

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130123/18/51009d689005d_m.jpg
So close
You have trees growing out of her head
Raise chin a bit
Aim eyes where nose is pointed [Right now the whites of the eyes are aimed at camera lens]
Jan 28 13 08:23 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
FritzTheWonderMutt
Posts: 22
San Marcos, California, US


Thanks, that helps. Anyone else?
Jan 29 13 07:09 am  Link  Quote 
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Drew Smith Photography
Posts: 5,209
Nottingham, England, United Kingdom


The bottom line doesn't work for me - too much landscape not enough model.
Jan 29 13 07:14 am  Link  Quote 
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