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Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


let me give you my thoughts on your images.

the good the bad and the ugly

try me I don't bite to hard
Jan 28 13 02:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,256
Los Angeles, California, US


It's ok, you can bite. smile
Jan 28 13 02:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Barely StL
Posts: 765
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Hit me. smile
Jan 28 13 02:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Secret Treasures Studio
Posts: 65
BEECH ISLAND, South Carolina, US


sure
Jan 28 13 02:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 1,995
Chicago, Illinois, US


Curious to hear your opinions
Jan 28 13 02:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand


yes Please
Jan 28 13 02:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
APS-Chicago
Posts: 982
Chicago, Illinois, US


I think I have some of each!
Jan 28 13 02:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Nikki Heat
Posts: 84
Novi, Michigan, US


Always interested in the good, the bad, & the ugly..
Jan 28 13 03:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Carolina Goddess
Posts: 146
Augusta, Georgia, US


I'll play!
Jan 28 13 03:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


Go on! Bite me smile
Jan 28 13 03:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
EdwardKristopher
Posts: 3,353
Tempe, Arizona, US


Let's see!
Jan 28 13 05:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
juliarabkin
Posts: 548
Rochester, New York, US


smile
Jan 28 13 06:11 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 1,006

First one I look at this morning and really good images, although way too many nudes to view while eating my cornflakes this morning.

Love this one:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30825725                                     strong look from the model

Two beautiful girls and this is the best you can create.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29412650

I see this as a modern take on Ophelia which I like.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28254148

My thoughts are that you are very talented, but could take it to a level higher.

Maybe less in quantity and more in quality.
Jan 28 13 10:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Barely StL
Posts: 234
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Promising start but do more of this;

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30621960

and less of this;

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30715435

Get out of the studio, pack away Photoshop and get some raw energy going.
Jan 28 13 10:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Secret Treasures Studio
Posts: 61
BEECH ISLAND, South Carolina, US

OMG !!!

Not my taste, but top marks for effort.

The toilet seat should of been up.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21943710
Jan 28 13 11:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 1,261
Chicago, Illinois, US

Great location, great model, excellent image
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/17994245

Great location, great model, bad image (where did it all go wrong)
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/12721999

Excellent portrait
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20327226
Jan 28 13 11:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Model
Maruschke
Posts: 387
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand

This one is lovely, soft and well taken:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31448100

This one displays a cute and playful nature:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29541338

And then this one is where it all goes wrong:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31234889
Jan 28 13 11:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Jan 28 13 11:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Jan 28 13 11:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Model
Carolina Goddess
Posts: 105
Augusta, Georgia, US

The Good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31016371

The Bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30675268

The Ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30960136

Well done I admire your confidence.
Jan 28 13 11:44 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


_eMMe_
Posts: 491
Florence, Toscana, Italy

The Good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27990610

The Bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30608114

The Ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30905770

Very stylish woman, I wish you continual luck with your modelling.
Jan 28 13 11:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


photographer
EdwardKristopher
Posts: 1,838
Tempe, Arizona, US

What can I say; it's like looking at some fake internet dating agency.

Where is the art of the photographer?

Some very pretty models, lots of awful images.
Jan 28 13 11:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
JuliaRabkindotcom
Posts: 408
Rochester, New York, US

The Good

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16881436
(my favourite picture for today)

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30002054

The Bad/Ugly

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18173283
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/18255778

I understand what you are trying to do, but get away from the gimmicks. You are too talented to waste your time.

Also consider getting into real black and white printing (film and a darkroom), because I think you could produce some amazing pictures.

You have an eye for black and white.
Jan 29 13 12:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Camerosity
Posts: 5,086
Saint Louis, Missouri, US


Lay it on me.

(I may request a recount in a couple of months when I finish updating. What you see is the last three months of 2011 and the first 5-6 days of 2012. I'm about halfway through 31,000+ newer images - but I'd be interested in what you have to say about the first snapshot in time.)
Jan 29 13 12:20 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Justin Parry
Posts: 38
Bournemouth, England, United Kingdom


Ok go, need to freshen up
Jan 29 13 12:31 am  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


Martin Coombes wrote:
_eMMe_
Posts: 491
Florence, Toscana, Italy

The Good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27990610

The Bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30608114

The Ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30905770

Very stylish woman, I wish you continual luck with your modelling.

Thanks, I am curious to know why you don't like the bad one, it is a shot I like both for expression and pose.

Jan 29 13 01:58 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Camerosity
Posts: 2,056
Saint Louis, Missouri, US

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26197863

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26197859

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/26311213

All of your photos are very good, but I feel a lack of passion in them. Sort of like a very good high street photographer.

What I would suggest is get one llama, go away for the weekend with her and shoot all the time.

Develop a relationship between the photographer and the llama where the camera does not feel like a barrier between both of you.

Find some passion
Jan 29 13 02:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Justin Parry
Posts: 35
Bournemouth, England, United Kingdom

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28768724

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29523903

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29760560

Honestly I see potential here, but I think you are trying too hard.
Get down to some basics and plan your shoots better.

Take this image,
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30496864

You had the right idea, good model, but then look at the flat light, the power cables cutting her in half.

You could have waited for a better day or personally I think this idea would work well in the early evening, with good back fill in flash.

Attention to detail is what is missing
Jan 29 13 02:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


_eMMe_ wrote:
Thanks, I am curious to know why you don't like the bad one, it is a shot I like both for expression and pose.

I have to admit the eye contact is very good.

But look at the wrinkles around the nose.

When I look at this image I can't stop asking myself "why"?

Jan 29 13 02:17 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
BrandonLundby
Posts: 117
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


I'll have a go!
Jan 29 13 02:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
B C L
Posts: 75
Las Vegas, Nevada, US

This was hard!

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29815820

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038297

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24198669

The reason why I said hard is because all the images are good.

With the bad one I think more could have been made with this. Also remove the shoes.

With the ugly one ..... please don't add things to an image that really has no reason to be there.
Jan 29 13 03:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Affinity Finch
Posts: 652
Bodmin, England, United Kingdom


Go for it smile
Jan 29 13 04:50 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 813
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


I'll play...
Jan 29 13 05:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Henry Westheim
Posts: 587
Taichung City, Taichung City, Taiwan


Yes, please.
Jan 29 13 05:10 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
BrandonLundby
Posts: 117
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


Martin Coombes wrote:
Photographer
B C L
Posts: 75
Las Vegas, Nevada, US

This was hard!

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29815820

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30038297

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24198669

The reason why I said hard is because all the images are good.

With the bad one I think more could have been made with this. Also remove the shoes.

With the ugly one ..... please don't add things to an image that really has no reason to be there.

Thank you!

Jan 29 13 05:53 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Model
Jade Honey
Posts: 566
Bodmin, England, United Kingdom

Oh !!  Jade this is going to be hard; I have you as one of my favourite models.

Well here goes,

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30778429
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30141078

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28863914

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30422672

Wish I was back in the UK, because I would of loved the chance to take some photos of you.
Jan 29 13 06:19 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Doug_
Posts: 20
Redmond, Washington, US


Go for it!
Jan 29 13 06:31 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Nikki Heat
Posts: 84
Novi, Michigan, US


Wow!  Thank you so much!  I actually agree with you on the good and two of the bad, but am curious what you don't like about http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31072370? 
I really appreciate your compliment!

Jan 29 13 07:54 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
TDSImages
Posts: 574
Salt Lake City, Utah, US

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31088291
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31088237

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19514903
As much passion as a wet afternoon

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/16471139

Overall some nice images.

When you get a couple together it must have passion, desire and lust.

It is hard as models are not actors, but when you do that type of photo the models must act and feel it or it just will show in the image.
Jan 29 13 08:00 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Photographer
Henry Westheim
Posts: 420
Táizhōng, Táizhōng shì, Taiwan

Ok .....I am officially jealous.

I lived in Taichung Taiwan for two years and loved every minute of it. I miss it very much and if someone would pay my airfare I would be there tomorrow.

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29885226

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29885226

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28700179

Have to be honest and say it was hard to choose the bad and the ugly.
Jan 29 13 09:04 am  Link  Quote 
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