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Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Nadezhda Repina wrote:
give mine a shot please smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31434501
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30577213

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31638991

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30892465

Although I did not list the nudes under good, I have to say that I liked them and you display a great deal of confidence in them.

Feb 12 13 12:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


BelezaModel wrote:
I would love to know what you think! Yes, I know my port is tiny )=

With only five images to look at I think it would be unfair to label them.

So if you don't mind I will list a comment on each image.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31433443   
Nice image, I feel the bag was not needed and the focusing is out, your front foot is not sharp. I blame the photographer and not you for this.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30821875 
This is a bit of leap from the first image, but a very good shot and you look great.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30768929
I like this image and could not fault it very much.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30684560 
This image displays a beginners pose and looks a bit basic in set up.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30709389                                 

When I first saw this image I automatically hated it, but as I looked at it again I began to like it.

My only problem is with the rose you are holding. Far too big and dare I say it's plastic.

If it is, than shame on the photographer.

If he has the pleasure of photographing you naked than out of respect he should of used real roses.

Feb 12 13 12:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
VictoriaLynnFrisby
Posts: 12
Talladega, Alabama, US


Me please! smile
Feb 12 13 01:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Katie Pagani
Posts: 239
New York, New York, US


Martin Coombes wrote:

With only five images to look at I think it would be unfair to label them.

So if you don't mind I will list a comment on each image.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31433443   
Nice image, I feel the bag was not needed and the focusing is out, your front foot is not sharp. I blame the photographer and not you for this.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30821875 
This is a bit of leap from the first image, but a very good shot and you look great.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30768929
I like this image and could not fault it very much.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30684560 
This image displays a beginners pose and looks a bit basic in set up.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30709389                                 

When I first saw this image I automatically hated it, but as I looked at it again I began to like it.

My only problem is with the rose you are holding. Far too big and dare I say it's plastic.

If it is, than shame on the photographer.

If he has the pleasure of photographing you naked than out of respect he should of used real roses.

Fair enough and I do apperciate the assesment smile Thank you for taking your time out to look through it Xo

Feb 12 13 01:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
janine cockerham
Posts: 21
Manchester, England, United Kingdom


go on then I'll play smile
Feb 12 13 01:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lela Jesse
Posts: 1,148
Arcata, California, US


Thank you! smile

Feb 12 13 09:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


VictoriaLynnFrisby wrote:
Me please! smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31618495
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31620341

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31619152

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31564282

Dare I say it, but your port looks like you have gone away with your boyfriend for a naughty weekend; even a picture of you in the car on the way.

Guess what I am saying is you need some new images and away from the hotel bedroom.

Feb 12 13 11:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


janine cockerham wrote:
go on then I'll play smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31314160
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31448168

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31535068

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31534716 
Really bad nude image and print quality.

One quick tip if you are going to do a nude, do not wear tight underwear before.

This way you will not get the marks aross the skin.

Otherwise your images are really nice and I wish you luck on your modelling.

Feb 13 13 05:13 am  Link  Quote 
Model
janine cockerham
Posts: 21
Manchester, England, United Kingdom


Martin Coombes wrote:

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31314160
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31448168

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31535068

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31534716 
Really bad nude image and print quality.

One quick tip if you are going to do a nude, do not wear tight underwear before.

This way you will not get the marks aross the skin.

Otherwise your images are really nice and I wish you luck on your modelling.

Thanks for that,appreciate it. Although the line is not from my knickers,i have 3 kids smile

Feb 13 13 05:28 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


janine cockerham wrote:

Thanks for that,appreciate it. Although the line is not from my knickers,i have 3 kids smile

sorry !

Feb 13 13 08:57 am  Link  Quote 
Model
VictoriaLynnFrisby
Posts: 12
Talladega, Alabama, US


Martin Coombes wrote:

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31618495
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31620341

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31619152

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31564282

Dare I say it, but your port looks like you have gone away with your boyfriend for a naughty weekend; even a picture of you in the car on the way.
Guess what I am saying is you need some new images and away from the hotel bedroom.

Thank you for the critique!  I have headshots & 2 other sessions set up smile

Feb 13 13 09:30 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah Louise Gater
Posts: 294
Stoke-on-Trent, England, United Kingdom


I'm curious smile
Feb 22 13 08:06 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Devlin
Posts: 681
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Okay, let's hear it. smile
Feb 23 13 04:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Go ahead smile
Feb 24 13 10:35 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Sarah Louise Gater wrote:
I'm curious smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30599772
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30599796

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31775674

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31770327

You are clearly a beautiful model, but I don't see a knock out image here. I am sure you will meet the right photographer one day.

Feb 24 13 11:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Meghan Devlin wrote:
Okay, let's hear it. smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30388263
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28597015

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31771529

The ugly
none

Have to be honest the word "ugly" and you do not belong together.

Feb 24 13 11:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Meghan Hale wrote:
Go ahead smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31210719
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31292690

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31210656

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31210676

Very impressive start to your modelling, and with your natural look I think finding work should be easy.

Feb 24 13 11:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Leone P
Posts: 515
Batley, England, United Kingdom


Martin Coombes wrote:

Leone P
Posts: 260
Batley, England,                                                           United Kingdom

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30921957
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30922076

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30922036

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31474456

For a long time I had a problem with girls having tattoos. Yet since living in Germany where it is very popular, I have not only begun to like them, but actually find them sort of sexy - your tattoos look really nice.

There I did not bite too hard smile

Oo, i have only just seen this! Thankyou very much. big_smile x

Feb 25 13 05:19 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Devlin
Posts: 681
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Martin Coombes wrote:

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30388263
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28597015

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31771529

The ugly
none

Have to be honest the word "ugly" and you do not belong together.

Thank you very much!

Feb 25 13 09:27 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Maruschke
Posts: 543
Darfield, Canterbury, New Zealand


I have some new stuff in there, could you have a look again big_smile
Feb 25 13 11:52 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Maruschke wrote:
I have some new stuff in there, could you have a look again big_smile

Always happy to take another peep.

I will list three that I like and three that I would ditch asap

Like
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31697148

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31448100

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29541338

Ditch
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31200167

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31236497

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31234889


I like the new images as well. They show a softer more romatic look.

Hope it helps smile

Feb 26 13 12:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Devin Sparkes
Posts: 62
Los Alamitos, California, US


Id like some critique smile
Mar 01 13 08:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Martin Coombes
Posts: 115
Goslar, Lower Saxony, Germany


Devin Sparkes wrote:
Id like some critique smile

The good
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27857264
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29683924

The bad
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30241533

The ugly
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/24444855

I love the two "good", each show a different style of you, which highlight the talented model you are.

Mar 01 13 11:33 pm  Link  Quote 
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