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closed Jan 28 13 08:26 pm Link  Jan 28 13 09:16 pm Link  Jan 28 13 09:35 pm Link Jorge Kreimer wrote: The first thing i notice here is that the mouth and eyes are out of focus. The focus is on the ear. This immediately distracts me from the emotion here. I love the mouth. It is just right, but the eyes look squinted. I find myself confused on what this image is trying to say. Jan 28 13 10:00 pm Link B C L wrote: This is great. Very crisp and clean. The expression on the woman is perfect. I can feel the longing or loneliness she is feeling. The way her hand is holding her shirt really adds to it. Perfecty expressed. Jan 28 13 10:02 pm Link Jan 28 13 10:25 pm Link Madison P Cook wrote: This is a fun shot, and i can see a lot of work went into it. However, the expression feels forced to me. It can be hard to make an expression look genuine. But that is what it takes to get the viewer to connect. Jan 28 13 10:28 pm Link Poulsons Photography wrote:
Jan 28 13 10:57 pm Link  Jan 28 13 10:59 pm Link Jan 28 13 11:01 pm Link  Jan 28 13 11:12 pm Link  Jan 28 13 11:15 pm Link Jan 29 13 12:41 am Link Jan 29 13 04:51 am Link This?  Jan 29 13 05:02 am Link  Jan 29 13 06:36 am Link Cop for this then:  Jan 29 13 06:39 am Link Select Models wrote: yes. great work. i can totally feel the emotion here, and it is very believable. Well done. Jan 29 13 07:53 am Link Heartbar wrote: not bad, just feels like it lacks emotion. and maybe that is what you are going for. I find the fact that the beard is in focus and the eyes out of focus distracting me from it though. Jan 29 13 07:54 am Link John Allan wrote: close, but i find the face expression to look forced. Jan 29 13 07:54 am Link ChiMo wrote: kind of torn on this one. she just seems to be staring at something. Jan 29 13 07:55 am Link _eMMe_ wrote: dont like. first it is blurry. second, i am not sure what is happening. Jan 29 13 07:55 am Link HEATHER 19 wrote: In the middle on this one. The expression almost looks blank to me. lifeless. Jan 29 13 07:57 am Link TDSImages wrote: yes, solitude and loneliness. Works great. Jan 29 13 07:57 am Link Thiha Ty Htut wrote: not really any feeling in this one. Jan 29 13 07:58 am Link Drew Smith Photography wrote: Very well done. full of emotion. Well portrayed. Jan 29 13 07:59 am Link  Jan 29 13 08:00 am Link Jeffrey M Fletcher wrote: Cool picture, but I have no idea what is trying to be expressed. Jan 29 13 08:01 am Link What are your thoughts?  Jan 29 13 08:03 am Link Pixyst wrote: The pose is great. With the right face expression this would be perfect. But there seems to be no emotion in her face. Is she excited, shocked, embarrassed? Jan 29 13 08:06 am Link Poulsons Photography wrote: Perhaps that's good: it's certainly supposed to be something that would be difficult to describe using words. Trying for enigmatic, a surreal variant of that enigmatic Mona Lisa theme. Jan 29 13 08:14 am Link  Jan 29 13 08:29 am Link MissLaurelle wrote: Shows a feeling of shyness, while at the same time an excited look. Well done. Jan 29 13 08:30 am Link  Jan 29 13 08:53 am Link  Jan 29 13 09:01 am Link Kristen_C wrote: I really can't tell if its a look of passion, tiredness, or happy. Jan 29 13 01:21 pm Link C A T H Y wrote: The top one works. It feels sad and alone. But the bottom not so much. the expression is almost one of warning! Jan 29 13 01:22 pm Link  this is the one I really wanna get your intake on Jan 29 13 01:23 pm Link MissLaurelle wrote: I think this one is very well done. I felt as though I just walked in on you unexpected. The look on your face says it all. Great work. Jan 29 13 01:27 pm Link  Jan 29 13 01:27 pm Link |
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