9 new shots, from shoot with a friend yesterday, would like to hear suggestions on how I can improve my work, thanks. Jan 31 13 02:03 am Link I would try to keep all of the models fingers in the composition Exposure, I do not see much detail in models hair Pose arch the back, position models left arm behind her more to help fill void in photograph bottom right corner Photoshop out fly away hair Instead of the white bungee ties in hair, think brown ones would be less distracting Boots make sure they are polished toes are scuffed Floor has dirt in front of models left hand Give toe more breathing room too close to photo border Pose, less neck bend, move left elbow to photo right to help build a better foundation for model, think pyramid Think if nose were pointed more toward camera would work better Less space to photo right of model, could just crop in more Eyes do not appear to be in sharp focus Think this would be better if models right eye were not cut off Need more detail in hair Less head tilt Shadow of nose is to long as it is touching models lip Need more light in models right eye This has great detail in models hair Of the photos like this the most, real connection with model Jan 31 13 05:59 am Link |