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Tilli A
Posts: 358
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Hey guys, id really appreciate it if i could get some help on which photos i should keep in my port and which ones aren't doing me any justice.

Thank you so much xx
Feb 02 13 02:48 am  Link  Quote 
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Lee_Photography
Posts: 7,645
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120602/01/4fc9d5d6879ec_m.jpg
Keep for now, good expression
Just wish red stuff was not blocking view of you

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100418/01/4bcac269074c4_m.jpg

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100130/01/4b63fcd6f22d6_m.jpg

From a model and photography stand point these are your best images

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130202/02/510ce6a800bf2_m.jpg
Its nice to have a tear sheet, here is what I see in this page.
In 3 of the 4 photos your pose could be better
In the first group notice how model in red and blue outfits arm is posed while yours are just hanging at your sides
The same is true of the other double model images in this group
The single model pose you do have your right are involved

Other images were not selected due to pose, photography or processing. You have showed us you can model in some of your images, so I now expect to see that in all the photos you post

You have the talent and look good in front of the camera so just need to step it up a bit

Wish you continued success!
Feb 02 13 05:19 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,515
Lansing, Michigan, US


I'd think about removing this one

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/100130/00/4b63e8fb2961b_m.jpg

The main light was apparently low thus making your nose shadow fall nearly on your eye. The black net top and the pose/cropping make you look bigger (wider) than you are.

Just my opinion.
Feb 02 13 07:18 pm  Link  Quote 
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