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Photographer
Tobiwaun
Posts: 20
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I am just starting out on MM as a photographer and am looking for feedback on my profile and portfolio.
Feb 02 13 09:05 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Nor-Cal Photography
Posts: 2,577
Walnut Creek, California, US


Ditch the first 3 images in the top row. Rest is better. Also, change your avatar to show your work instead of you.

But just one worthless opinion.  smile
Feb 02 13 09:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Aaron Lewis Photography
Posts: 5,082
Catskill, New York, US


You have a very nice diverse portfolio. Obviously well seasoned.

I agree the first three are weaker than the rest
Feb 02 13 09:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tangent Pictures
Posts: 43
Montpellier, Languedoc-Roussillon, France


As I feel it, if youd could do more along that line:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/14/50e9f4bfc90ae_m.jpg
(my fave), perhaps with a tad more subdued/discrete backgounds, that'd be great! smile
Feb 02 13 09:49 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tobiwaun
Posts: 20
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
Ditch the first 3 images in the top row. Rest is better. Also, change your avatar to show your work instead of you.

But just one worthless opinion.  smile

Thanks. I appreciate the feedback!

Feb 02 13 12:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Michael Kerrek
Posts: 1,394
Orlando, Florida, US


Nor-Cal Photography wrote:
Ditch the first 3 images in the top row. Rest is better. Also, change your avatar to show your work instead of you.

Yeah, the top 3 don't add anything to the portfolio. Maybe keep the first, if you're really looking to start shooting more of that genre, but otherwise lose all 3. Apart from that, some good stuff in there. smile

Feb 02 13 12:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Tobiwaun
Posts: 20
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


I removed two of the three and changed the Avatar!
Feb 03 13 07:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Hailey Gauthier
Posts: 24
Lafayette, Louisiana, US


I really like your style!
Feb 03 13 07:25 pm  Link  Quote 
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