I would like to know where I stand now. Please let me know what I can improve on as I am new to all this. I can take it lol

Keep working on projects with different people and develop your own styles. 

I concur. You obviously get it. You have a nice variety of images. Nice lighting skills, nice composition.

Just keep going. Expand outside the comfort zone and explore.

If I could make one suggestion I would ditch this image.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31352531

It doesn't fit with your port and it looks over processed or something.

I'm not a fan of your lighting. The images all seem a bit dull... from a lighting point of view. Nothing 'pops' out from your images... they all seem two dimensional.

Shadows add contour and dimension, color can 'pop' if it's lighted well.

Maybe it's your post work. The exposure looks okay, but the images just don't 'sing'.

Just my opinion.