I really like the simple honest approach to your photography.
This one is great:
In comparison to the one above, this one seems weaker - not sure what it is, perhaps the more direct lighting and cramped composition, but it seems less natural, more contrived.
The tones in this B&W make it a very compelling shot and I like the very natural feel of it. Wonderful freckles!
I generally don't care for extreme angle shots and this is no exception.
I find the smoke rings distracting in this image, but otherwise quite like it.
This seems like a very strange crop and it doesn't work for me. She's got great eyes, but I am drawn to the bottom of the frame to her mouth to see her complete expression and it's cropped off.
I love the mood of this one!
I hope that's helpful.