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Maggie Xia
Posts: 440
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Just want everyone's opinion on:

What are the top 3 or 4 imgs in my port and why?

What imgs should I get rid off?

In return I'll tell you my fav and least fav img in your port smile

Thank you!
Feb 04 13 04:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Paul Tirado Photography
Posts: 3,928
New York, New York, US


Good

Good Mix
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130203/16/510f00742704e_m.jpg

Nice shows face well
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121128/20/50b6e7f4e456e_m.jpg

Strong pose and expression.
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121216/15/50ce53e512593_m.jpg

Nice mix of grace and industrial
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/16/51104f1abafd2_m.jpg


Not so good

Odd angles of limbs cut you off. More a photographer's shot
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130120/19/50fcbb0418bd2_m.jpg

Kind of unnatural in an stiff way
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130203/16/510f0370c33bc_m.jpg
Feb 04 13 07:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Heartbar
Posts: 72
Port Angeles, Washington, US


This image shows you off well.  Nice pose, great picture!  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30664308

One of your best:  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30800388

This is a great picture and very artistic, but does not show you as the  model very well: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31366057
Feb 04 13 09:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Sarah_
Posts: 1,300
Denver, Colorado, US


Top 3:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121128/20/50b6e7f4e456e_m.jpg
Favorite for sure!  Absolutely lovely smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130203/16/510f00742704e_m.jpg
I especially like the top 2.  smile  Great job emoting

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121216/15/50ce53e512593_m.jpg
Strong stance & I love the styling. 
(I do wish the text weren't there; it's quite distracting.  Also, I know that the people who started the "Inspire Magazine" that you're referring to probably didn't know this, but Inspire is also the name of the online magazine published by Al Qaeda.  I'd recommend being careful about attaching your name to anything that could be mistaken for something so controversial.)



Bottom 3:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121204/19/50bec1fdf2edf_m.jpg
Looks like a snapshot someone took in a messy bedroom


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130204/16/51104f1abafd2_m.jpg
Here you did a nice job of modeling and that it's not your fault, but the composition of this photo does not work at all for me... especially as a thumbnail.


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121228/16/50de3d6a39e9f_m.jpg
This pose seems very awkward like you're about to fall over backward.
Feb 04 13 09:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 440
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Paul Tirado Photography wrote:
Good

Thank you for the critic paul smile

you have so many great work so i'm just going to pick the ones that commend my attention:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29944109
what can i say, i'm obsessed with dancing lol

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/8682378
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30024232
love the composition and angle

not as good ones:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25922877
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29260910
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/25922973
These pics don't match up the qualities of others. I understand why you put them up..but maybe only leave 1 or 2?

AMAZING WORK!

Feb 05 13 05:29 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 440
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Heartbar wrote:
This image shows you off well.  Nice pose, great picture!  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30664308

One of your best:  http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30800388

This is a great picture and very artistic, but does not show you as the  model very well: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31366057

thanks for the critic smile

THANK YOU for getting rid of all the colorful distracting borders.

best
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31119419
like someone said before, you are really good at this type of portrait. maybe shoot some of the female models the same way?

worst:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31169612
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31169569
I just cannot stand the oily look on her face...you know what you need to work on from your critic thread but you also need to make sure that your models always have makeup on and hair groomed. it's always easier to get the pics right at first than fixing them later on photoshop

smile

Feb 05 13 05:33 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 440
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Sarah_ wrote:
Top 3:

Thank you for the critic smile

fav:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29966674
idk why this img remind me of cosette when she's young..i just love your expression and the volnerability in your eyes

I dont like how the top of this one:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27180187
this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/20605621
and this
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/21798631
are basically the same pic. I personally think one is enough

anyway you are an AMAZING model with an unique look and large range of expressions. can't wait to see more of your work smile

Feb 05 13 05:39 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Maggie Xia
Posts: 440
Atlanta, Georgia, US


anymore takers? smile
Feb 06 13 05:08 am  Link  Quote 
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