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Kaja Curtis
Posts: 3
Prague, Prague, Czech Republic


I am new to MM and only have a few photos posted so far. Have a look, what do you think.
Thanks for your time. smile
Feb 06 13 02:39 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,290
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


To start off I can honestly say that I like your work, here are a few suggestions

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/02/511234115a9b7_m.jpg
Point nose toward camera to center eyes
Move away from background so it is a blur, or open up your lens


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130205/14/511183c6cc35a_m.jpg
Move hands toward center of stomach so wrists are less wrinkled

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/04/50e972275ad8c_m.jpg
Cropping, less space above head
Rim light or backlight so models form can be seen
Have eyes look more toward where nose is pointed
Lower shoulder toward camera

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/04/50e9715e03f1f_m.jpg
Least favorite image in portfolio

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/04/50e970ae0feeb_m.jpg
Think I would suggest cropping tighter at top of head to eliminate the ā€œVā€ from where she parted her hair
[Halfway between top of photo and where hair ends on forehead]

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/04/50e9734663747_m.jpg
Not my cup of tea
Would love to see both of her hands
Feb 06 13 07:58 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,918
Lansing, Michigan, US


I agree with the previous post. This image should go...

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/04/50e9715e03f1f_m.jpg

It does not flatter the model, and the finger to mouth is objectionable as
it carries a lot of sexual baggage.

Just my opinion.
Feb 06 13 02:23 pm  Link  Quote 
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