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Oleg Kosach
Posts: 24
Yekaterinburg, Sverdlovsk, Russia


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/11/5112a974e891f_m.jpg
Feb 06 13 11:07 am  Link  Quote 
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Ledo retouch
Posts: 1,145
Lodi, California, US


I think you did a good, thorough job on this image. The only thing I
would change is the small spot in the white of the eye, I know it's
inn the original. Overall quite good, you've improved al aspects.
Feb 07 13 05:54 pm  Link  Quote 
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The Invisible Touch
Posts: 717
Tarragona, Catalonia, Spain


In my opinion, you have taking it too far!!

There is places with wrong texture and it almost looks blurred!! The main thing I see is the top part of the eye, between the eye and eyebrow could do with some light, bring out the detail as it looks really dark.
Feb 17 13 12:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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Retouch007
Posts: 403
East Newark, New Jersey, US


yes, skin looks plastic try not to use filters and stick with basics.
Feb 18 13 06:03 pm  Link  Quote 
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ChelleyCredible Retouch
Posts: 453
Boston, Massachusetts, US


Some areas seem to have a lot less pores than others and on the white on the eye you have a spot that needs removal. Over all I give this a 9/10. I liked it.
Feb 21 13 06:15 pm  Link  Quote 
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