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MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Rousing Images wrote:
I would love the feedback.

You're making images that are flirting with the edges to porn. That's not without charm but to be really cool they have to be technically better (better exposed e.g.) and more appering to be purposely that way. The way you're on (assuming what I described is your goal) is right however.

Feb 13 13 03:38 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Natallia Nia wrote:
i just start.what will  you say about me?

You have 3 images I like / really like, this is my fav:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130213/23/511c962bb22af_m.jpg

It's ok you also have a few images that show your body + figure, but the other ones I would ditch. Seriously drags down your port. Better to have a few great ones than many but a lot that suck.

Feb 14 13 03:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Rick Krueger NJ wrote:
Thanks for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated. To your point, the text is really the part that is failing... Luckily, the two you picked are among the newer shots in my port, so I think I'm moving in the right direction.

I am interested in which shots you feel are "cheap" and was wondering if you might explain a bit more... Not sure I fully grasp your meaning.

Thanks!

Sorry, bad translation.
In english you would say "cheesy" I guess.
This is one that especially avoked that comment:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121122/07/50ae444c52cb8_m.jpg

Feb 14 13 03:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Maria Susanti
Posts: 536
Banyuwangi, Jawa Timur, Indonesia


me please
Feb 14 13 03:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


AshleyJames Photography wrote:
Pick me =]

Sorry, I don't like any. And you don't have much. The first model looks pretty ugly especially with that styling, the second one is just very stiff and the whole scene looks staged (in a bad way). The lighting, the framing - not good at all.

Feb 14 13 03:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Digital Artist
ShuttingDown
Posts: 68
Crystal Lake, Illinois, US


I don't have much, but would be very curious on your take on virtual models.
Feb 14 13 03:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Big A-Larger Than Life wrote:
Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!  big_smile

Your port is a mess.
I see A LOT of photos you usually see on a facebook page, but they have no place in a model's portfolio.
And there are way too many photos altogether.
I really like your short hair, slender figure and open and joyful personality I see in a few of your pics. But I could not find a single image that takes all that and turns it into a great picture.
Really a shame, I see a ton of wasted potential there. :-(

Feb 15 13 09:28 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Byron Chua
Posts: 231
Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines


smile
Feb 15 13 09:33 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DRaskin Photography
Posts: 164
Sacramento, California, US


If you have time, please take a look at my port and let me know what you think. Thanks.
Feb 15 13 09:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Maria Susanti wrote:
me please

Nice port.
Your posing looks often quiet stiff and you do that "hand-above-shoulders"-thing too much, but then again I don't know nothing about the indonesian market. wink
However, i would like to see more drama and a little less bright, colorful plain images.
That's why I prefer this:

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/08/4fec7b1f30c86_m.jpg

Feb 15 13 09:43 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


RickyArt wrote:
I don't have much, but would be very curious on your take on virtual models.

I'm sorry, but I don't know how to critique that. :-(

Feb 15 13 10:02 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Byron Chua wrote:
smile

Really nice work, I especially like the first row.
Keep that going.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120702/19/4ff25b5030074_m.jpg

Feb 15 13 12:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


DRaskin Photography wrote:
If you have time, please take a look at my port and let me know what you think. Thanks.

Nice, but not exceptional. Try other models/poses, other lighting and/or other themes than just cars&girls to get something more exciting.

Feb 15 13 12:23 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Darling photo
Posts: 1
Olympia, Washington, US


me please.
Feb 15 13 12:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kelly Ann Carter
Posts: 93
Hollywood, Florida, US


Me?
Feb 15 13 04:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Brosius Photographics
Posts: 1,491
Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania, US


Can you find anything decent in my portfolio?
Feb 15 13 05:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Foxy Tokala
Posts: 257
Atlanta, Georgia, US


Please do me!  I am planning on a downsizing and getting rid of the watermark on all the images I want to keep that unfortunately has one, so I would love to know if you would tell me which one you like best!  Thank you
Feb 15 13 05:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Kallea
Posts: 77
Knoxville, Tennessee, US


Yes please! smile
Feb 15 13 05:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Alexander's Fine Art
Posts: 12,738
Reading, Pennsylvania, US


I would love your input....  I think.  smile
Feb 15 13 05:30 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
gpmcguire
Posts: 1,169
Brooklyn, New York, US


I dare you to find it. 








I might regret that in the morning.
Feb 15 13 05:35 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Laurel Lee
Posts: 53
London, England, United Kingdom


try me
Feb 16 13 03:21 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Tia Harris
Posts: 17
Eivissa, Balearic Islands, Spain


Im a newbie so would really appreciate the feedback. stunning portfolio by the way smile
Feb 16 13 06:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jhono Bashian
Posts: 2,428
Cleveland, Ohio, US


try to find it!
Feb 16 13 06:54 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Rayne Tupelo
Posts: 21
Louisa, Virginia, US


I would love a critique! :-)
Feb 16 13 08:28 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


My Darling wrote:
me please.

This is your best series (yet):

18+ http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31439296

The other ones in your port are mostly more like portrait snapshots.

Feb 17 13 08:41 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Sorry...double post.
Feb 17 13 08:42 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Scott Sullivan Photo
Posts: 1,175
Royal Oak, Michigan, US


Interested.
Feb 17 13 09:01 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Your avi may be the best in yur port now.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130106/18/50ea302959a1c_m.jpg

Kelly Ann Carter wrote:
Me?

You've got some nice, simple images. I'd like to see something more sophisticated in addition though.
The posing in your swimwear-images does not look very good.
You claim a lot in your profile text, your port isn't showing enough prove right now IMHO.

Feb 17 13 09:10 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
PicturePerfectImage
Posts: 79
Edmonton, Alberta, Canada


Are you still working on this? I would love to hear your comments..
Feb 17 13 09:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sensual light studios
Posts: 45
Hollywood, Florida, US


OK
Feb 17 13 04:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Lori Hart
Posts: 20
Irmo, South Carolina, US


Curious.
Feb 17 13 04:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Folly Photographe
Posts: 61
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


If your still going up !
Feb 17 13 10:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
PigeonFoo
Posts: 284
Syracuse, New York, US


Could you offer me your opinion?
Feb 17 13 10:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Visual Creations LV
Posts: 72
Las Vegas, Nevada, US


ok i'll bite
Feb 17 13 10:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dan Brady
Posts: 605
Perth, Western Australia, Australia


Yes please smile
Feb 18 13 06:23 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Brosius Photographics wrote:
Can you find anything decent in my portfolio?

Nice port, but maybe a bit much.

Would like a bit less flare & orange, but besides this is my fav:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120628/19/4fed0c23eeeb3_m.jpg

Feb 18 13 11:40 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Foxy Tokala wrote:
Please do me!  I am planning on a downsizing and getting rid of the watermark on all the images I want to keep that unfortunately has one, so I would love to know if you would tell me which one you like best!  Thank you

I'm not impressed by your port. Can't find one I really like, sorry.

Feb 18 13 11:54 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


Salle de Soleil wrote:
Yes please! smile

I think you need some more variety, looks like you only show about 3 shots. Show more and sort some out then.

Feb 18 13 12:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Clothing Designer
Chainmaille Treasures
Posts: 828
Hermitage, Tennessee, US


i'll give it a try
Feb 18 13 12:02 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MiGel
Posts: 656
Hamburg, Hamburg, Germany


EA Photographics wrote:
I would love your input....  I think.  smile

Your style mostly does not quiet meet my taste but you show some nice pictures.

This is my fav:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/060701/21/44a72a9d5e030_m.jpg

Feb 18 13 12:05 pm  Link  Quote 
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