You're making images that are flirting with the edges to porn. That's not without charm but to be really cool they have to be technically better (better exposed e.g.) and more appering to be purposely that way. The way you're on (assuming what I described is your goal) is right however.
Rick Krueger NJ wrote: Thanks for the feedback. It is greatly appreciated. To your point, the text is really the part that is failing... Luckily, the two you picked are among the newer shots in my port, so I think I'm moving in the right direction.
I am interested in which shots you feel are "cheap" and was wondering if you might explain a bit more... Not sure I fully grasp your meaning.
Sorry, bad translation.
In english you would say "cheesy" I guess.
This is one that especially avoked that comment:
Sorry, I don't like any. And you don't have much. The first model looks pretty ugly especially with that styling, the second one is just very stiff and the whole scene looks staged (in a bad way). The lighting, the framing - not good at all.
Big A-Larger Than Life wrote: Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
Your port is a mess.
I see A LOT of photos you usually see on a facebook page, but they have no place in a model's portfolio.
And there are way too many photos altogether.
I really like your short hair, slender figure and open and joyful personality I see in a few of your pics. But I could not find a single image that takes all that and turns it into a great picture.
Really a shame, I see a ton of wasted potential there. :-(
Your posing looks often quiet stiff and you do that "hand-above-shoulders"-thing too much, but then again I don't know nothing about the indonesian market.
However, i would like to see more drama and a little less bright, colorful plain images.
That's why I prefer this:
Please do me! I am planning on a downsizing and getting rid of the watermark on all the images I want to keep that unfortunately has one, so I would love to know if you would tell me which one you like best! Thank you
You've got some nice, simple images. I'd like to see something more sophisticated in addition though.
The posing in your swimwear-images does not look very good.
You claim a lot in your profile text, your port isn't showing enough prove right now IMHO.
Foxy Tokala wrote: Please do me! I am planning on a downsizing and getting rid of the watermark on all the images I want to keep that unfortunately has one, so I would love to know if you would tell me which one you like best! Thank you
I'm not impressed by your port. Can't find one I really like, sorry.