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rachel nicole
Posts: 20
Dubuque, Iowa, US


I was told by friends I looked nervous. I was. Throwers over100 foreign speaking strangers at the event, in Chicago, that was setup much like I imagine a strip club would be.
I tried to look cool and calm, but I think the nerves got the best of me..

I've received great compliments from many people, but I'd love a critique.
Is this port worthy?



Any critique on my profile/portfolio would be highly valued. Thank you all.
Feb 09 13 05:43 pm  Link  Quote 
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rachel nicole
Posts: 20
Dubuque, Iowa, US


Can you see the photo? I can't from my mobile... Incase you can't... http://i46.tinypic.com/2wbzs4g.jpg lol
Feb 09 13 05:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Effective Image
Posts: 3,933
Lansing, Michigan, US


Port worthy... Nope, IMHO. My main objection is the positioning of your right arm. Doesn't seem 'natural' and the lighting did it no favors (kinda darker and that draws attention to it).

As for your portfolio, the bottom two rows don't help you much, and you should replace those images with better ones as you get them.

Just my opinion.
Feb 09 13 07:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
David Kirk
Posts: 4,398
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


I don't think it will add positively to your portfolio.  I think you could do much better.
Feb 10 13 02:29 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Darryl Varner
Posts: 677
Lexington, Kentucky, US


Personally, I don't believe that particular shot is going to enhance your portfolio. As to your question regarding your portfolio in general - I'd dump the yellow tinted image and then choose the best of each outfit/location. In my opinion showing a variety of photos - even though they may be few in number -comes across better than displaying several similiar images.
Feb 10 13 02:50 am  Link  Quote 
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