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Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


I'm having so much fun on MM now I want to critique a image for you. I'll tell you whats wrong with it and what you need to do to improve it. just so you know I'm not qualified to do this its just for fun.. you have to pick one for me.

I'll do at least 10
Feb 10 13 03:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


ok, me^^

Amazing looking btw
Feb 10 13 03:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Ceci L wrote:
ok, me^^

Amazing looking btw

You have to pick the one for me to Critique.. it's the rule.

Feb 10 13 03:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


arr, ok.. The AVI one^^

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/19/5115c8e559695_m.jpg
Feb 10 13 04:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Ceci L wrote:
ok, me^^

Amazing looking btw

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130201/11/510c179ceb292_m.jpg

Ok this one seems a bit to straight on to the camera, I think the left hand is also to straight on because it is so much more brighter then the face it seems to draw my eye in. the only other thing would be is to maybe fill in the hair on her right side our left. other then that bam looks good. just turn that hand so pinky side is toward the camera in will narrow the hand and the face will be the center of attention

Feb 10 13 04:08 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Ceci L wrote:
arr, ok.. The AVI one^^

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/19/5115c8e559695_m.jpg

I like this a lot just watch how the hair falls kinda messy on her left our right. maybe soften the skin on the right side of her tummy.

Feb 10 13 04:09 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Ceci L
Posts: 235
Villena, Valencia, Spain


Thank you, I get 2x1 tongue

I think I'm going to replace the first shoot you commented to another one of that shooting. You are right on what you said, and can feel something wrong with that pic.
Feb 10 13 04:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Decay of Memory
Posts: 571
Asheville, North Carolina, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130129/17/51087a7d9b950.jpg
Feb 10 13 05:31 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Dark Side
Posts: 308
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


This one?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120208/08/4f329c0696e42.jpg
Feb 10 13 07:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Autumn Rose Brightly
Posts: 1,063
Charlotte, North Carolina, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg
Feb 10 13 08:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Feb 11 13 10:50 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Decay of Memory wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130129/17/51087a7d9b950.jpg

Ok this is just flat out amazing art. I see in the 1st picture where it looks like the subjects heart was removed, then I saw the heart in the 2nd image, creating a thought provoking visual, at first I was disappointed that the heart would have been on the wrong side in the first shot, then it hit me. I'm either looking at a reflection in a old mirror or a tin type captured image. This piece belongs in a art show. thank you for sharing and thank you for the challenge.  I gave you a standing ovation.

Feb 11 13 10:51 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


The Dark Side wrote:
This one?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120208/08/4f329c0696e42.jpg

nothing major here. a few very small hairs out the hoop earing on the far side bothers me a little but that's being nit picky over all pretty.

Feb 11 13 11:05 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Autumn Rose Brightly wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121224/21/50d9360ae4044_m.jpg

Ok this one I feel the big mass of skin lit the most is very distracting my eye goes right to that, it is very a unflattering pose If you had her put her right hand behind her more and turned her tummy away from her knees that would thin her out so much tone the light down on that right side maybe add a little light to your models face I'm not sure what the term for it is but I think its something like backlight so the back of the face is lit and the camera side is still kinda shadowy.

Sorry just realized you were the model not the photographer. I guess it doesn't change my view. I looked at your port and its very pretty as well as you. Good luck with your modeling.

Feb 11 13 11:17 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Decay of Memory
Posts: 571
Asheville, North Carolina, US


Delani Jade wrote:

Ok this is just flat out amazing art. I see in the 1st picture where it looks like the subjects heart was removed, then I saw the heart in the 2nd image, creating a thought provoking visual, at first I was disappointed that the heart would have been on the wrong side in the first shot, then it hit me. I'm either looking at a reflection in a old mirror or a tin type captured image. This piece belongs in a art show. thank you for sharing and thank you for the challenge.  I gave you a standing ovation.

That is an excellent analysis, thank you so much for the time, your thoughts and a surprise.

Feb 11 13 01:29 pm  Link  Quote 
Artist/Painter
Vincent Wolff
Posts: 2,840
Chicago, Illinois, US


why not?  smile
Feb 11 13 01:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DScottPhotography
Posts: 141
Bradford, England, United Kingdom


Me please? smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/08/5117c9cf3f94b_m.jpg
Feb 11 13 02:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
C J Wright
Posts: 34
Los Angeles, California, US


Hit me with your best shot
Feb 11 13 04:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
The Dark Side
Posts: 308
Salt Lake City, Utah, US


Delani Jade wrote:

nothing major here. a few very small hairs out the hoop earing on the far side bothers me a little but that's being nit picky over all pretty.

Thank You!!

Feb 12 13 06:04 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Images by MR
Posts: 7,461
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/17/51199dd248015_m.jpg
Feb 12 13 06:07 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
D-Fotograf
Posts: 54
Frankfurt, Hassia, Germany


Delani Jade wrote:
I'm having so much fun on MM now I want to critique a image for you. I'll tell you whats wrong with it and what you need to do to improve it. just so you know I'm not qualified to do this its just for fun.. you have to pick one for me.

I'll do at least 10

Seriously?? You should start by getting past High School and work on your own Port??

Feb 12 13 06:08 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Joseph William
Posts: 1,927
Chicago, Illinois, US


What do you think of this?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111222/20/4ef4076cbd6cb_m.jpg
Feb 12 13 06:11 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Images by MR
Posts: 7,461
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Delani Jade wrote:
I'm having so much fun on MM now I want to critique a image for you. I'll tell you whats wrong with it and what you need to do to improve it. just so you know I'm not qualified to do this its just for fun.. you have to pick one for me.

I'll do at least 10
D-Fotograf wrote:
Seriously?? You should start by getting past High School and work on your own Port??

Seriously??  You should go play somewhere else sad

Feb 12 13 06:16 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jeffrey M Fletcher
Posts: 4,314
Asheville, North Carolina, US


D-Fotograf wrote:

Seriously?? You should start by getting past High School and work on your own Port??

Some advice, if I may.

Your comment here is rather high on snarkiness and low on any intelligent content. It merely serves, with your low post count, to introduce you to members of the community as someone who really isn't very witty or insightful and who apparently has some need to demean the efforts of the op on the basis of her age.

It's also in violation of site rules - you need to be on topic, and not engage in personal attacks.

The op is doing quite well and using the site as it's intended. You need to go back and read the rules and perhaps be less eager to show your personality by your casual rudeness towards younger persons.

Feb 12 13 07:55 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Katie Pagani
Posts: 239
New York, New York, US


Tell me what you think (=
Feb 12 13 08:25 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


DanielScott2191 wrote:
Me please? smile

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130210/08/5117c9cf3f94b_m.jpg

wow this is a tough one for me the forlorn look of the model the hunched shoulders are the first tings i see. but how can one be critical of that if it is the artistic impression of the artist. im not sure if i get it, it really doesn't speak to me but i did stare at it for quite sometime and i think that is what most artists want.

Feb 12 13 01:48 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
GER Photography
Posts: 7,496
Imperial, California, US


Love this shot of you, coves all the angles!:-)

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130207/18/51146a0003557_m.jpg
Feb 12 13 01:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Cameron J Wright wrote:
Hit me with your best shot

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130130/22/510a0a44e5fb6_m.jpg


my eye goes right to the white line on the shade, seems like that would be a easy photoshop job to remove that, i also get a sense that she is a amputee of her right arm just the way the sleeve is, so I guess in a nut shell the left side of the image  bugs me. one knit pick item would be the hump on her left shoulder.

Feb 12 13 01:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


, Images by MR wrote:
http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/17/51199dd248015_m.jpg

again a tough one, other then some small hair issues maybe a background that is a bit  to bright there is not a lot for me to say. but it seems rather boring to me over all but maybe thats what the artist was trying to capture with the slumped spine the blah expression a vulnerable and scared damsel.

Feb 12 13 02:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
sammyspade
Posts: 98
Portland, Oregon, US


Feb 12 13 02:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


Joseph William  wrote:
What do you think of this?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/111222/20/4ef4076cbd6cb_m.jpg

This confuses me I can see its a ladies night out by the caption they are at a bar and one girl has a wardrobe change getting into her red top, another girl is sitting in a dim lit room but out of no where there is a sun flair blasting through. just seems a bit disconnected to the title. but with that said im sure it was a fun shoot.

Feb 12 13 02:40 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


BelezaModel wrote:
Tell me what you think (=

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130126/02/5103b38c316f3_m.jpg

No much to be critical on here just three little things, the left arm is to straight and static maybe bring the right hand up on your leg, slide yourself as far to the front of the chair as you can to accentuate your long legs. other then those very small things a very pretty picture of you.

Feb 12 13 02:55 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Delani Thibodeau
Posts: 21
Sterling Heights, Michigan, US


sammyspade wrote:
How about this one:

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31599457

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130208/17/5115a66e6766a_m.jpg

very interesting all the way around. at first I thought i wanted to see the model up and down in the frame, I wanted to see her hair and arms and if i were a guy I'd want to see more from her waist down. but after viewing this art piece for more time I love it. I would not change the severed limbs the chopped head. The look on her face is a bit distressed almost zoned out making this a story telling piece, I love images that are thought provoking and this one is that. thank you for sharing.

Feb 12 13 03:07 pm  Link  Quote 
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