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Everyones Awesome
Posts: 70
Portsmouth, England, United Kingdom


Here are two of my newest images. I am suffering from "been staring at them too long and dont know if they are done or not" syndrome.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31570298

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31628791

Thanks ahead of time
Feb 11 13 10:25 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Hensley Photography
Posts: 328
Duncanville, Texas, US


They both feel as though they need the contrast popped especially in the dark areas which are blocked up. The top image is cool, but could be brighter overall.
Feb 11 13 03:13 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DScottPhotography
Posts: 141
Bradford, England, United Kingdom


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/10/511931e4ec692_m.jpg
I feel this one is done.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/08/51127e8cabbd2_m.jpg
This one just needs a little more contrast, and brightening on the face. A great photo though.
Feb 11 13 03:25 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Everyones Awesome
Posts: 70
Portsmouth, England, United Kingdom


Thanks Guys.

I dont know why but MM seems to darken my images when i upload. If you were to see them on my FB page  http://www.facebook.com/EAwesomePhotography  you can see that they are much more colorful.. well a bit anyway
Feb 11 13 03:43 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,400
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130206/08/51127e8cabbd2_m.jpg
Wrinkled background
Face is dark compared to body
Prefer hand not to block view of models face
Pointing fingers at camera will tend to make them look short

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130211/10/511931e4ec692_m.jpg
Too much dead space for a models portfolio
Big toe sticking up on models right foot
Hair band o wrist
If anything you should have her looking at your big logo
Arch back, let hair cascade down more gracefully
[Not lump up on shoulder]

Over all both seem to lack pop
Feb 11 13 04:08 pm  Link  Quote 
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