I have three new shoots booked with completely different photographers!
I would like to know what people think about the photos I currently have and what there should be more of etc

You need more full length photos, and some in swimsuit or lingerie that show off your figure.

Photos to add:
Full length standing
Standard color studio head shot



Raise your chin
[This is some times referred to as a “Broken Neck” because of the excessive head tilt; a little goes a long way]
Move away from the background
Move right arm to fill the frame
[Empty space between arm and photo border is often referred to as a gutter, as the viewer’s eyes can wander off the bottom of the image]



Raise chin to reduce white area at the bottom of your eyes
[This much white area is sometimes referred to as “Canoe Eye” because the shape resembles the outline of a canoe]
Lower shoulder toward camera for longest appearing neck


You are adorable
Would love to see more life and expression
Lower right shoulder and roll it back and down
[Details, small black threat top of models left cup, trim off next time or ask photographer to Photoshop out]


You are a beautiful young lady, just need to show more of your life and energy in your photos,

Good luck on your upcoming shoots

I don't often give advise/suggestions like this because I have so much to learn myself but I think you need images that show your ability to express emotion.  Try more varied facial expressions.  Add more full body poses and outfits that show your body type and form.  Get creative with hair and make-up, if you can do your own that will be great, if not see if you can arrange hair and make-up TF's.  Practice, practice, practice.  Shoot as much as you can with as many photographers as you can and try to learn something each time.