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and i will critique it. feel free to post multiple times, but please (!) be polite and let other people get a few in between. if you don't link or choose one i won't critique anything.  Feb 13 13 04:35 pm Link Feb 13 13 04:40 pm Link Feb 13 13 04:46 pm Link AshleyJames Photography wrote: the light is nice on her skin- i wish that the background was a little darker, or the edges were, because that would draw my eye in to the center (try doing a layer mask over one where you darken using levels)-- the colors are nice... the skin feels a little glowing, in an odd way, the more i look at it. i think the thing is that the picture looks like it should have drama, but then it doesn't, it is just... nice. a girl in the woods. with a costume. that could be really storybook, but it isn't quite. Feb 13 13 04:54 pm Link Bravo Magic Images wrote: i like how dark it is, but on my monitor i see a darker outline where all detail is lost outlining her against the backdrop. weird. i am not a fan of the color- the pale pink skirt... it makes the shadows look green. also her leg is the brightest highlight. try to dodge/burn so it is more even maybe. i do love the shadows on the neck, and would love to see it brought out even more. Feb 13 13 04:56 pm Link Yeah I can see what you mean , thanks for spending your time looking =] Feb 13 13 04:58 pm Link Feb 13 13 04:59 pm Link Feb 13 13 04:59 pm Link Kess M wrote: Thanks i love your info... I guess you see more detailed work if your useing a HD monitor as i only have a basic lap top monitor nice to know thank you for takeing the time. Feb 13 13 05:02 pm Link Ceci L wrote: well, not a fan of the picture persay based on the edit/backdrop/etc. - but- for you, i think it is ok, but not great. i wish you had stretched out a little more, put something more dynamic in the pose, pointed your toes a little, arched a little more- it looks like it wants to be more sexy/glamour, but then you just lie there. you have a great figure, i think you can show it better though by pushing a little harder and creating more interest, throwing the head back, or something. act when you model, don't pose! Feb 13 13 05:03 pm Link Boston Artist Model wrote: think the edit/frame could be more interesting, that aside-- you look like you are stiff, someone told you to stand that way and you did. your face feels empty. i think you should try to bring more intensity to your eyes, and some motion, or natural feeling to your pose. Feb 13 13 05:04 pm Link Is this a conflict of interest?  Feb 13 13 05:11 pm Link  Feb 13 13 05:20 pm Link GNapp Studios wrote: nah Feb 13 13 05:29 pm Link Images by MR wrote: somehow my eyes is first drawn to the upper right- background, probably not a good thing. the light is nice, but i don't feel like the image really pops, or has impact- have you played with curves/luminosity mask? i would darken the shadows in curves using a luminosity mask and see what happens. all in all, it is a nice enough picture, but nothing stands out. Feb 13 13 05:31 pm Link Feb 13 13 05:31 pm Link Feb 13 13 05:50 pm Link SPV Photo wrote: love the tone/edit- retro feel, the light is nice- only thing is her legs look short/odd, it looks like you are taller than the model/makes her look short- maybe would have shot it from a lower angle, OR! fix the crop and crop right at the bottom of the underwear to get rid of the really odd thigh shape. Feb 13 13 05:54 pm Link Outer Limit Photography wrote: logo! distracting! odd white lines from logo? distracting! glowing orb at the end of the heel? makes no sense. the light is nice, but not a fan of the wrinkly backdrop/wrinkled sheet she is laying down on. i think the color of her face is a little different than the body too- there is more color in her shoulder than on her face. Feb 13 13 05:57 pm Link Feb 13 13 06:00 pm Link Kess M wrote: Thanks for your opinion... Feb 13 13 06:01 pm Link Paully S wrote: hmm well the skin edit bugs me- your face looks red and not even, the fabric is a little 'floating head' too. your eyes are lovely, ps, but your mouth looks a little tense. it looks like you aren't fully comfortable on camera. try just shaking it out, make silly faces, squinch your face then relax it. try to act with your face, not put it in to a pose. Feb 13 13 06:06 pm Link Kess M wrote: Thank you for the thoughts. I will keep in mind what you said Feb 13 13 06:06 pm Link thanks for the crit  will doFeb 13 13 06:08 pm Link Feb 13 13 06:17 pm Link Sorry for double post...my bad! Feb 13 13 06:18 pm Link Is this image a good catalog shot?  Feb 13 13 06:19 pm Link on pause- may or may not return o.o Feb 13 13 06:28 pm Link Sorry, didn't catch that this is the active one. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31479794 18+ Feb 13 13 06:50 pm Link Feb 13 13 07:05 pm Link What about me ?  Feb 13 13 07:19 pm Link Feb 13 13 08:54 pm Link How about this one?  Feb 13 13 09:17 pm Link  Feb 13 13 09:24 pm Link  Feb 13 13 11:28 pm Link    I generally don't do these things, but I admire you're work, so I'd like your opinion, thank you! Feb 14 13 11:29 am Link  Feb 14 13 11:37 am Link  Feb 14 13 12:35 pm Link Feb 14 13 01:00 pm Link You've already done one of mine, so feel free to come back to this if you want to. https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31653339 (18+) Feb 14 13 01:58 pm Link |
