Forums > Critique > Fun and Games > Kidding yourself or major potential!

Photographer

Pixyst

Posts: 356

Phoenix, Arizona, US

What truth do you see?

Jul 20 13 02:16 pm Link

Model

Tremmy

Posts: 19

Nairobi, Nairobi, Kenya

the amateur is listening O.o

Jul 20 13 04:32 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Pixyst wrote:
What truth do you see?

The truth is you're not kidding anybody!! Mad lighting skills, pro level stuff all of the way!! Nicely executed concepts, some I've seen before of course, but after over 100 years of photography, what hasn't been done before. Potential realized!!:-)

Jul 20 13 06:42 pm Link

Model

Michelle AKA Nerdych3f

Posts: 6

Saint Cloud, Minnesota, US

I'm just getting back in the game. I would love some advice. smile

Jul 20 13 06:52 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Tremmy wrote:
the amateur is listening O.o

You have a pleasant face, but at 5'4" I don't see much potential for fashion runway work. Commercial/Lifestyle maybe. I have no idea what the market is like in Russia, but good luck!:-))

Jul 20 13 06:53 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

curls and pearls wrote:
I'm just getting back in the game. I would love some advice. smile

Ok, first things first! Your avatar should be a pic that draws the viewers eye, yours is too dark to represent you at all. More smiles, less frowns, better photographers might lead to some local potential, but for now, keep the day jobs.

Jul 20 13 07:03 pm Link

Model

Tremmy

Posts: 19

Nairobi, Nairobi, Kenya

GER Photography wrote:

You have a pleasant face, but at 5'4" I don't see much potential for fashion runway work. Commercial/Lifestyle maybe. I have no idea what the market is like in Russia, but good luck!:-))

thanks GER!
it's a reality i faced a while ago! the market is not friendly at all...
but i'll keep keeping on.
cheers! smile

Jul 20 13 07:56 pm Link

Photographer

Kalef

Posts: 13

Lowell, Massachusetts, US

GER Photography wrote:

Your potential will depend on just how much time and effort your willing to put into learning photography. You have 3 photographs, the rest are snapshots. YouTube is your friend there's tons of info there.

Can u point wich ones? Pls

Jul 20 13 08:25 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Kalef wrote:

Can u point wich ones? Pls

3 and 4 top row, and 4 on second row show more care taken as to lighting and composition. Your white balance is all over the place and the posing in others is like vacation shots a couple might take.

Jul 20 13 08:42 pm Link

Model

Raven Blake

Posts: 58

Amundsen-Scott - permanent station of the US, Unclaimed Sector, Antarctica

Would love some advice smile

Jul 20 13 10:05 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Raven Blake wrote:
Would love some advice smile

At 5'4" you should be closer to 100# than 140#. You seem comfortable posing and have some good shots, but I don't see mainstream potential.

Jul 21 13 07:32 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photo NYC

Posts: 7348

New York, New York, US

Shoot!... I'm curious.

Jul 21 13 07:39 am Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Marin Photography NYC wrote:
Shoot!... I'm curious.

You make it too easy!! Great potential!! You are a photographer, you know how to "work the light", good concepts well executed!! Great model selection too! KUDOS!!:-)

Jul 21 13 07:53 am Link

Photographer

Marin Photo NYC

Posts: 7348

New York, New York, US

GER Photography wrote:

You make it too easy!! Great potential!! You are a photographer, you know how to "work the light", good concepts well executed!! Great model selection too! KUDOS!!:-)

Wow! Thank you! I still feel like a noob though. big_smile

Jul 21 13 08:04 am Link

Photographer

Red Baron Photography

Posts: 330

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

hit me:)

Jul 21 13 08:12 am Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Red Baron Photography wrote:
hit me:)

You take allot of pictures but without enough thought or care taken as too lighting, composition... Your WB is all over the place making for poor color rendition. I have the same problem sometimes, I call it the " naked girl in the room syndrome ".
Before shooting for real in each setup go through the entire menu of the camera, take test shots at different WB settings and pick the one that gives the best color, not just the one you think is right, auto WB is almost never right in mixed lighting.

Jul 21 13 08:28 am Link

Photographer

Red Baron Photography

Posts: 330

Montreal, Quebec, Canada

Thank you very much for taking the time and advice, highly appreciated!

Jul 21 13 08:48 am Link

Model

AnnAdB

Posts: 202

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

Let's play this game. Note: Only had 10 shoots.

Jul 21 13 12:29 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

AnnemiekdenB wrote:
Let's play this game. Note: Only had 10 shoots.

You're a lovely girl, good stats, though not skinny enough for haute couture necessarily. (picky bastards!!):-)) I think you show great potential!

Jul 22 13 06:54 am Link

Model

Donnie Dae

Posts: 90

Brooklyn, New York, US

Sure, I'll join in.

Jul 22 13 06:56 am Link

Photographer

DRaskin Photography

Posts: 167

Sacramento, California, US

Ok, I'm very interested in your opinin and look forward to it.  Thanks.

Jul 22 13 09:20 am Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Greg DAE wrote:
Sure, I'll join in.

Guys keep asking, but I really don't have any idea about what the male modeling industry wants in a model, I personally don't shoot males. Your potential will be what you make of it with your time and effort marketing yourself.

Jul 22 13 06:54 pm Link

Model

Tiffiney C

Posts: 570

Los Angeles, California, US

GER Photography wrote:

Cute face, very emotive, great body, inventive posing... You've worked with some great photographers who have seen and shown your amazing potential!! I'd love to shoot with you!!:-)

Thank you!

Tiffiney
www.TiffineyC.com

Jul 22 13 07:05 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

DRaskin Photography wrote:
Ok, I'm very interested in your opinin and look forward to it.  Thanks.

By golly, you're gettin there! Your studio lighting is pretty good, the location stuff is kind of hit & miss. White balance is good. Try some experimenting with composition, empty space, rule of thirds... Having the subject of a photograph center frame is OK for headshots, but gets boring real quick.

Jul 22 13 07:13 pm Link

Model

C A T H Y

Posts: 5464

Anaheim, California, US

go for it.

Jul 22 13 08:23 pm Link

Model

Samantha Dempsey

Posts: 20

Beaverton, Oregon, US

Hit me with your best shot (: I'm still pretty new and working to improve.

Jul 22 13 08:33 pm Link

Photographer

DRaskin Photography

Posts: 167

Sacramento, California, US

GER Photography wrote:

By golly, you're gettin there! Your studio lighting is pretty good, the location stuff is kind of hit & miss. White balance is good. Try some experimenting with composition, empty space, rule of thirds... Having the subject of a photograph center frame is OK for headshots, but gets boring real quick.

Damn it, you're right. I have fallen into a bit of a rut with the models generally centered. I was working rule of thirds, but yes, I need to work a bit more with the empty space. Appreciate the critique.

Jul 22 13 08:58 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

C A T H Y     wrote:
go for it.

Very nice indeed!! You don't need to ask me about your potential, its apparent in your port!! Maybe a few more smiles!:-))

Jul 22 13 09:09 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Sammi Wayne wrote:
Hit me with your best shot (: I'm still pretty new and working to improve.

Pretty girl! At your age it's very important that a parent be fully involved in and present at any shoot!! Don't expect much from MM. You need to get yourself seen by real modeling agencies, not these stupid wannabe "agencies" that make you pay for modeling classes or make you pay for photos from their recommended photographers. You need to contact big city high end modeling agencies and ask them how best to present yourself to them.
You must change your avatar!!!! The black box is a total buzzkill, I NEVER look at any port with an unrecognizable avatar. I would recommend this one!:-)
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130327/16/51538409ef301_m.jpg

Jul 22 13 09:23 pm Link

Model

Samantha Dempsey

Posts: 20

Beaverton, Oregon, US

GER Photography wrote:

Pretty girl! At your age it's very important that a parent be fully involved in and present at any shoot!! Don't expect much from MM. You need to get yourself seen by real modeling agencies, not these stupid wannabe "agencies" that make you pay for modeling classes or make you pay for photos from their recommended photographers. You need to contact big city high end modeling agencies and ask them how best to present yourself to them.
You must change your avatar!!!! The black box is a total buzzkill, I NEVER look at any port with an unrecognizable avatar. I would recommend this one!:-)
https://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130327/16/51538409ef301_m.jpg

Thank you very much! (:

Jul 22 13 09:25 pm Link

Model

AnnAdB

Posts: 202

Amsterdam, Noord-Holland, Netherlands

GER Photography wrote:

You're a lovely girl, good stats, though not skinny enough for haute couture necessarily. (picky bastards!!):-)) I think you show great potential!

Thank you!

Jul 23 13 12:48 am Link

Photographer

mcclary

Posts: 84

Plantation, Florida, US

I'm new. First port. Lets play!!

Jul 23 13 01:03 am Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

mcclary wrote:
I'm new. First port. Lets play!!

I can't decide whether I'm seeing just poor technique or artistic intent. There isn't really a good photograph in your port. It's time to hit amazon and get some books on photography.

Jul 23 13 06:57 am Link

Photographer

mcclary

Posts: 84

Plantation, Florida, US

GER Photography wrote:

I can't decide whether I'm seeing just poor technique or artistic intent. There isn't really a good photograph in your port. It's time to hit amazon and get some books on photography.

Lmao.  Cool

Jul 23 13 10:22 am Link

Model

chasingKelly

Posts: 95

Stanton, California, US

Oh gosh yes please let me know. Haha.

Jul 23 13 10:26 am Link

Model

C A T H Y

Posts: 5464

Anaheim, California, US

GER Photography wrote:

Very nice indeed!! You don't need to ask me about your potential, its apparent in your port!! Maybe a few more smiles!:-))

Thank you big_smile

Jul 23 13 10:28 am Link

Photographer

Darryn Adams

Posts: 20

Boston, Massachusetts, US

Try me, please?

Jul 23 13 01:11 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

chasingKelly wrote:
Oh gosh yes please let me know. Haha.

Ok, first things first, you HAVE to rewright your profile!! The whole rant about not being skinny, unconventional... Is a total downer and most photographers will just got to the next port. You have a pretty face, great smile... I'd shoot you anytime from your pictures but nobody wants the drama.

Jul 23 13 05:51 pm Link

Photographer

Photofixia

Posts: 70

Auckland, Auckland, New Zealand

Good to see some honest, frank and pretty reasonable assessments of a wide range of portfolios!

Jul 23 13 06:03 pm Link

Photographer

GER Photography

Posts: 8463

Imperial, California, US

Darryn Adams wrote:
Try me, please?

Your avatar is a pretty damn good headshot, the other three are basically snapshots.

Photography is mainly about the light and how it falls on the subject, what are the qualities of the light, is it harsh (specular) or soft (diffuse). What direction is it coming from, is there light from more than one direction? One thing a photographer has to be able to do is "read" a photograph, look closely at it and by looking at the shadows and catchlights figure out where the light is coming from. Just starting out, it's time to get some books and burry yourself in YouTube for some tutorials on lighting.

Have fun, keep shooting!!:-)

Jul 23 13 06:16 pm Link