simple Polaroid shots- don't try to be fancy!
jean shorts and tight top -front back and profiles. several close ups- smiling teeth smiling no teeth, natural relaxed face. then do some cute close ups- think of puppies, think of a funny joke and not laugh, think of a sexy lingerie surprise for your BF, etc
No make up- do you think that raccoons eyes look good? eeeshhh
that will serve you better than your god awful attempts so far
plus I wouldnt have deleted pics based on one photographers opinion as you seem to have done.