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Nicole M Carroll
Posts: 14
New York, New York, US


I am an actress and I am looking for feedback on what my headshot says about me right off the bat. I would appreciate if you could take a look at this pic, and ONLY this pic, and provide an adjective (or list of adjectives) about what this headshot says about me.

It's great because I don't know any of you. You're not swayed by performances of mine that you've seen in the past or my real-life personality. So first impressions (not quality of the image/retouching) will be undeniably helpful as I determine how to market myself.

Considering so much of even getting the audition in the first place is based off of digital submissions, I'd like to know what my headshot says about me.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29474571

Serious responses only, please.


Thank you in advance for taking the time to read this and leave feedback!

Much love,

Nicole
Feb 25 13 04:59 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ForeverFotos
Posts: 5,499
Slidell, Louisiana, US


You need to post in the critique forum, critiques are not allowed in any other forum. See: http://www.modelmayhem.com/t.php?forum_id=8
Feb 25 13 05:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dean Johnson Photo
Posts: 49,718
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


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Feb 25 13 06:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Dean Johnson Photo
Posts: 49,718
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


To me it says that you're a good looking redhead, with some commercial appeal.

You have at least one other headshot that is better, but you don't want us to talk about any other photos so I shouldn't bring that up.
smile
Feb 25 13 06:14 pm  Link  Quote 
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DavidCoward Photography
Posts: 627
Sandy Springs, Georgia, US


Here's my entirely subject opinion.

When I looked at your photo the first thing I saw was your eyes and the first word that came to mind was "intelligent."

Then my eyes moved down and noted your mouth slightly open and I thought, "maybe not so intelligent."

Those were my immediate reactions to what I saw. I can't give any reason why a slightly open mouth "subtracted" intelligence points for me. It just did.

Note I'm not saying you're not intelligent. You asked for our initial impression and that was mine. Also, I agree with a previous poster who said that you have a better head shot in your port.

Best of luck!
DCP
Feb 25 13 06:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
LA StarShooter
Posts: 1,129
Beverly Hills, California, US


DavidCoward Photography wrote:
Here's my entirely subject opinion.

When I looked at your photo the first thing I saw was your eyes and the first word that came to mind was "intelligent."

Then my eyes moved down and noted your mouth slightly open and I thought, "maybe not so intelligent."

Those were my immediate reactions to what I saw. I can't give any reason why a slightly open mouth "subtracted" intelligence points for me. It just did.

Note I'm not saying you're not intelligent. You asked for our initial impression and that was mine. Also, I agree with a previous poster who said that you have a better head shot in your port.

Best of luck!
DCP

My first reaction was "bad headshot." I live in the land of headshots. The angle of your head in particular makes it a throwaway as far I'm concerned.

Feb 25 13 06:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Images by MR
Posts: 6,128
Vancouver, British Columbia, Canada


Nicole M Carroll wrote:
Considering so much of even getting the audition in the first place is based off of digital submissions, I'd like to know what my headshot says about me.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29474571

I wouldn't consider you for a acting role based on that headshot.

Just my thoughts ~ MR

Feb 25 13 06:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Clothing Designer
julietsdream
Posts: 253
Burbank, California, US


*Pretty
*Timid
Feb 25 13 06:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Thomson
Posts: 1,291
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


I don't think you give much personality in that photo. If anything I'd assume you're one of the 'sad friends'. The one who can be pretty fun to hang out with but also seems to put themselves down constantly or seek out the negatives in it all.

It's pretty though.
Feb 25 13 06:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
gl-amour
Posts: 549
Montreal, Quebec, Canada


Needs a catchlight.
Feb 25 13 06:51 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Innovative Imagery
Posts: 2,483
Los Angeles, California, US


Is this the one you guys like better?

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/120222/10/4f45382a1173d_m.jpg
Feb 25 13 06:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,422
New York, New York, US


Well I think many casting directors will notice that its not such a high grade head shot photographer- given the green back ground, the under lit eyes, and possibly skin retouching near the mouth (?)

but beyond that, a pretty woman but in this case not terribly expressive

I think it would be better if cropped a lot more- to the middle of the forehead- loose some of the sides and the shoulder

hang in there its a long slog to get the right shot.
Feb 25 13 08:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
JM Collins Photography
Posts: 13
Mabank, Texas, US


Nicole M Carroll wrote:
I am an actress and I am looking for feedback on what my headshot says about me right off the bat. I would appreciate if you could take a look at this pic, and ONLY this pic, and provide an adjective (or list of adjectives) about what this headshot says about me.

It's great because I don't know any of you. You're not swayed by performances of mine that you've seen in the past or my real-life personality. So first impressions (not quality of the image/retouching) will be undeniably helpful as I determine how to market myself.

Considering so much of even getting the audition in the first place is based off of digital submissions, I'd like to know what my headshot says about me.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29474571

Serious responses only, please.


Thank you in advance for taking the time to read this and leave feedback!

Much love,

Nicole

Find another photographer, he didn't capture YOU!!

Feb 25 13 09:06 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MelissaAnn
Posts: 2,723
Seattle, Washington, US


You're adorable, but your expression in that image seems bored and lifeless.  I like the lighting, and the way it's composed better than some of the other portraits you have posted, but your expressions are better in the others.  I would keep trying, because I think you can probably get something a lot better.
Feb 25 13 09:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
David Kirk
Posts: 3,768
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


Adjectives:

tense
shy/nervous
not easily approachable
Feb 25 13 09:36 pm  Link  Quote 
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