Kind of look like self shot images
This is a strong image
Next time move hair behind models left shoulder; this will open up your neck
Also roll back your left shoulder; this will open up the view to your neck and face
Photos that are taken with the camera looking down on you have the tendency to make you look small
Would really love to see your feet
Due to pose and outfit this is making your midsection look large
If you show me your knees I expect to see your feet
I would look for some other photographers to add to your portfolio
You have a great smile
Wish you well