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Sibby S
Posts: 178
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia


The top row of my port  - please let me know what you think. Any positive or negative critique welcomed smile
Feb 26 13 01:03 am  Link  Quote 
Clothing Designer
julietsdream
Posts: 617
Burbank, California, US


*Of the 4 shots, I would only keep the avatar pic in your port..!!
Feb 26 13 04:03 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Lee_Photography
Posts: 8,565
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130226/00/512c7986745a3_m.jpg
It’s an ok image, but for my taste would prefer chin to be raised for longest appearing neck, and to rotate head to model right a bit, this would have body and head in same orientation.
Could also tighten top with some clips in back that would eliminate the material bulge by left armpit


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130226/00/512c794abedca_m.jpg
This pose looks stiff
Dress wrinkled from waist down, thread hanging off lower hem [Models left]
Less head tilt

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130226/00/512c78dece3d2_m.jpg
Seated position is making your upper legs appear short
Raise your chin; you have lost your neck
Think your hips should be on an angle to camera

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130226/00/512c777058d06_m.jpg
Wish hands were not at sides of head
Head and body facing same direction
Hair could be smoother, with out the dark roots

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130220/07/5124eb5383297_m.jpg
Of your photos this comes across as classic elegance

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/121217/23/50d01d01daa7a_m.jpg
Model and pose wise this is another good effort on your part
Notice how long your neck appears

You possess a fantastic look, wish you well
Feb 26 13 04:53 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
A-M-P
Posts: 18,135
Orlando, Florida, US


Posing looks forced and stiffed.
Feb 26 13 05:40 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Studio 12
Posts: 193
Spartanburg, South Carolina, US


I think you look good, a bit stiff or maybe a bit uncomfortable.  The lighting, however, is really bad and hurts the images.  There is no shape or dimension to them and that pulls against your strengths.
Feb 26 13 05:46 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DScottPhotography
Posts: 141
Bradford, England, United Kingdom


Basically what others have said.
Your avatar is great, love the colours and the clarity.
The first two images I don't like, as said before, the poses look very stiff and forced, and the lighting/contrast is very flat and does nothing for you.

However, I really like the seated one, love the pose and composition.
Overall though, a great portfolio, show's diversity and true beauty. Keep it up.
Feb 26 13 06:06 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Mark
Posts: 2,889
New York, New York, US


they are the worst pics in your port. Glad to see your avatar is in that row so I can say the make up looks awful. those outfits are the antithesis of fashion and do nothing for you and photography is bland and the poses are poor,  u have other pics that are nicer.
Feb 26 13 09:34 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Francisco Castro
Posts: 1,679
Cincinnati, Ohio, US


Flat. The images lack any kind of depth or 3 dimensionality. The only one of note is the one you're using for your avatar.
Feb 27 13 07:41 am  Link  Quote 
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