Loose the borders
Raise camera closer to eye level so you are not shooting up the nose.
Also on the male outdoor, use reflector or flash or both to light up the eye sockets
Seems to work best when not blasting the camera with the whites of the models eyes
Try to keep all of the models fingers in the photos
Wide angle lens cause distortion, notice the size difference in models hands
Hide the stems of the flowers by positioning the top of flowers toward camera
Use a flash to pop the bride’s veil, so it is bright white and not gray