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Kelly Ann Carter
Posts: 92
Hollywood, Florida, US


Mar 15 13 12:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Good Egg Productions
Posts: 14,685
Orlando, Florida, US


no.
Mar 15 13 12:24 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
johnreefphotography
Posts: 175
Washington, District of Columbia, US


It's an awkward pose and the horizon is off.
Mar 15 13 12:28 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Good Egg Productions
Posts: 14,685
Orlando, Florida, US


It's my opinion that there are two choices for bikini footwear.  None (at least one foot on toes) and cork or rope wedges.  Dressy heels tend to look slutty.  Flats tend to make your legs look short.

Your pose is awkward.  Your expression is blank.  The background sky is overexposed.  Also, the shot is crooked, as mentioned.

Also, a black bikini is not my first choice of color for something like this.  I don't see any detail in the suit since the contrast was turned up so high.

Do you like the photo?

This one is much better. http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31467624
Mar 15 13 12:32 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
TampaFoto
Posts: 668
Tampa, Florida, US


Did not make use of a good location.
Lighting is off.
Horizon is off.
Good model but not a good look on this shot.

Fail !
Mar 15 13 12:33 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Crows Photography
Posts: 229
Dothan, Alabama, US


TampaFoto wrote:
Did not make use of a good location.
Lighting is off.
Horizon is off.
Good model but not a good look on this shot.

Fail !

+1

Mar 15 13 12:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jhono Bashian
Posts: 2,427
Cleveland, Ohio, US


There is no image to see???
Mar 15 13 12:39 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Rik Williams
Posts: 3,082
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Sorry Kelly that's a big no from me.
If this is the best from the shoot you need to reshoot or find someone who knows a little about lighting and giving direction.

Mar 16 13 02:02 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Risen Phoenix Photo
Posts: 1,036
Minneapolis, Minnesota, US


No... A horrible image
Mar 21 13 12:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Sergei Rodionov
Posts: 865
Dallas, Texas, US


nope. Pose, light traps, distortion, light...
Mar 21 13 02:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Matt Duke
Posts: 121
Cypress, California, US


Your right hand hides the hour glass shape of your body which makes it seem less flattering.
Mar 23 13 02:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
MichaelClements
Posts: 1,662
Adelaide, South Australia, Australia


No. I don't see a model. I see a girl trying to pose like one. The styling is way off and the photography, rather ordinary.
Mar 23 13 02:34 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
DVP Photography
Posts: 2,829
Broomfield, Colorado, US


Kelly, you are pretty with a nice figure. But that is only the start. You need to project some energy and sexiness into the image.  And the photography is very plain and listless.  Combined this is a boring photo.
Mar 26 13 12:10 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
AaronPawlak
Posts: 2,681
New York, New York, US


I hope after the shoot you immediately sought medical attention for the pain in your side you were experiencing.
Mar 26 13 12:23 am  Link  Quote 
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