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Seneca Thompson
Posts: 55
Anaheim, California, US


I've been trying to expand my portfolio and added a couple of new nudes. What are your opinions on them? Thanks:)

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32075097
18+

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32063724
18+
Mar 22 13 04:23 am  Link  Quote 
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Brett Hunt
Posts: 982
Washington Court House, Ohio, US


I like the second one better. looks more natural
Mar 22 13 04:29 am  Link  Quote 
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Good Egg Productions
Posts: 15,065
Orlando, Florida, US


Brett Hunt wrote:
I like the second one better. looks more natural

I second that.

Mar 22 13 04:30 am  Link  Quote 
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Moodscapes
Posts: 418
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Love them both - favour the first because it works comprehensively. In the second you look stunning but the setting is a bit like an Ikea commercial - your pose and look and the set don't sync for me - in another setting this would be an outsanding shot.
Mar 22 13 04:47 am  Link  Quote 
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Rik Williams
Posts: 3,224
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Number one is not very flattering to you at all. Your shape is deceptively pronounced in many ways and your skin stripped of texture, but most impressively your body has been flattened out despite every attempt to do the opposite through the use of dramatic lighting. Bad shot, way bad.

The second image is by far the better of the two. Your feminine qualities are displayed to a far greater effect.

Without a doubt I see it as one of your best overall.
Mar 22 13 04:53 am  Link  Quote 
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Guss W
Posts: 10,572
Clearwater, Florida, US


Both are worthy additions to your collection.
Mar 22 13 10:53 am  Link  Quote 
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dgold
Posts: 10,269
North Smithfield, Rhode Island, US


Guss W wrote:
Both are worthy additions to your collection.

Agreed.
I likey both photographs and poses...

Mar 22 13 10:57 am  Link  Quote 
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VA Photographer
Posts: 229
Richmond, Virginia, US


Both are good, 2nd one is awesome
Mar 22 13 10:59 am  Link  Quote 
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kl-photographics
Posts: 296
Lemgo, North Rhine-Westphalia, Germany


great shots both of them, actually i like the first one more, but the burn out parts i don't like. maybe they just got lost during convertion to b&w.
Mar 22 13 11:06 am  Link  Quote 
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Vintagevista
Posts: 10,562
Sun City, California, US


I like them both - but have minor quibbles with both.  (but this is nitpicking)

The first has a few issues already mentioned -

The 2nd has your toes curled so tight - as to create a feeling of tension - that is directly in opposition to the quiet relaxed nature of the image.

I'd have no problem seeing them both included.
Mar 23 13 11:25 am  Link  Quote 
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David Kirk
Posts: 4,398
Ottawa, Ontario, Canada


second one is lovely.  first is okay.
Mar 23 13 11:27 am  Link  Quote 
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aktphoto
Posts: 54
Vojens, Syddanmark, Denmark


On both shots good work on your part. The first pic is overprocessed. The second is spot on.
Mar 23 13 11:27 am  Link  Quote 
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Billh
Posts: 361
Raleigh, North Carolina, US


i like the 2nd
Mar 23 13 11:31 am  Link  Quote 
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Trond M Skaret
Posts: 131
Oslo, Oslo, Norway


David Kirk wrote:
second one is lovely.  first is okay.

+1

You can keep both in your portfolio if you want.

Mar 23 13 11:54 am  Link  Quote 
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Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,202
Los Angeles, California, US


I personally don't like either. You are just an object within the frame in both. I think you can do more interesting work than this as the subject of the photos, instead of an object in the photos, but if you are happy with them, by all means, keep them.
Mar 24 13 06:01 am  Link  Quote 
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