Two differences to notice between your image and the two targets: In the latter, the model is surrounded by warm yellows, and one of them also has some hot red in it. I suspect that's part of "the look" you're after.
Your model is surrounded by more understated sienna and umber tones, which are much less vibrant than the yellows of the targets. So factor that into your expectations.
To what extent does this edit capture the look you're trying for?
EDIT: with a dash of color