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Photographer
A-M-P
Posts: 18,130
Orlando, Florida, US


After
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8241/8573116240_ffe37ce696_b.jpg
Before
http://farm9.staticflickr.com/8509/8499373890_c98af835b8_b.jpg
Mar 25 13 03:56 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Retouch007
Posts: 403
East Newark, New Jersey, US


not much of a difference. what kind of story is this? what are you selling? I'm not clear with the direction. This is a good place to explore and get feedback from others . I would suggest is to look up your favorite pro image (in the direction you want to go with this) and try to copy. It's one really good way to learn.
Mar 26 13 12:57 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
A-M-P
Posts: 18,130
Orlando, Florida, US


Well it was just a test shot that I decided to use for skin retouching practice. I don't aim to completely change a photo or make it look like a lot was done but to slightly enhance only. I wanted to know how the D&B looks. My goal was to clean up the image without it looking retouched.
Mar 26 13 03:26 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Retouch007
Posts: 403
East Newark, New Jersey, US


A-M-P wrote:
Well it was just a test shot that I decided to use for skin retouching practice. I don't aim to completely change a photo or make it look like a lot was done but to slightly enhance only. I wanted to know how the D&B looks. My goal was to clean up the image without it looking retouched.

In that case it's fine. Practice with a harder image that one is way too easy for you.

Mar 26 13 03:52 pm  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
Kristiana-Retouch
Posts: 289
London, England, United Kingdom


Her necklace should get some clean up - it's dirty or, at least, it looks dirty. smile
Mar 31 13 10:27 am  Link  Quote 
Retoucher
The Invisible Touch
Posts: 709
Tarragona, Catalonia, Spain


I would suggest to get rid of a lot of flyaway hairs on face and neck, also the nose area it looks really messy regarding skin/texture!!

In my opinion, I don't this a great image for you to work on, try to get something a bit more simple and you will get better results.
Apr 01 13 09:10 am  Link  Quote 
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