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Photographer
Adam W Photography
Posts: 1,717
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


open to photographers mostly , models too.

listing men's editorial images & stories.

also offering critiques , from my pov

post an image or point to your port.
Mar 25 13 06:12 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Hi...would like to hear your comment . Thanks in advance
Cheers
Mar 25 13 06:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Adam W Photography
Posts: 1,717
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Jhomel wrote:
Hi...would like to hear your comment . Thanks in advance
Cheers

right now your port is devoid of much in the way of editorial. having said that,
you are doing great in the image below, in terms of body posture, neck, etc. the one thing that holds this image back from being edi is that you are looking at the camera. position of your head is fine, but I'd like to see your eyes glancing away.

I think that would take the image from portrait to more of an underwear story (or a start to one).

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/16/514262a60dbc0_m.jpg

Mar 25 13 06:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Adam W Photography
Posts: 1,717
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


anyone else?
Mar 26 13 08:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
juliarabkin
Posts: 545
Rochester, New York, US


i have a few
Mar 27 13 01:15 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Apostolos
Posts: 18
London, England, United Kingdom


open to critique / feedback! have a look at my portfolio and let me know smile
Mar 27 13 01:42 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Adam W Photography
Posts: 1,717
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


juliarabkin wrote:
i have a few

absolutely love everything about this shot. it has movement and interest and I want to buy the sunglasses. a perfect page.

I listed it.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/080722/04/48859439ccfe8_m.jpg

Mar 28 13 01:03 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Adam W Photography
Posts: 1,717
Toronto, Ontario, Canada


Apostolos G wrote:
open to critique / feedback! have a look at my portfolio and let me know smile

from an editorial perspective, this image does it for me in many ways, including the styling and the texture of the coat as well as your moustache and your eyes draw in the viewer.

I actually wish it was composed slightly different but that's neither here nor there.

I listed this shot.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130314/21/5142a7d761351_m.jpg

Mar 28 13 01:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Ali Choudhry Photo
Posts: 176
Brisbane, Queensland, Australia


Points to port.
Mar 28 13 05:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Photographer
Jorge Kreimer
Posts: 2,199
Los Angeles, California, US


http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130307/22/51398a76e13fb.jpg



More of a self portrait, really, but what the heck! smile
Mar 29 13 10:01 am  Link  Quote 
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