Forums > Critique > Would I work with you as a Model/Photographer?

Model

Ereka Marcelino

Posts: 2600

Kihei, Hawaii, US

hienvy

Apr 18 13 03:04 pm Link

Model

Cecilia Or

Posts: 227

Toronto, Ontario, Canada

Erlinda wrote:

You are so tiny and cute. Your portfolio needs some cleaning up and some more fresh beauty work.

Yes, I would work with you.

Oh... Wow... Thank you for your interest in working with me!!

Hopefully, I will have an opportunity to visit England one day...

Apr 18 13 03:27 pm Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

JersyScott wrote:
Just started...hit me!

The type of work I shoot with a male model is not something I would should with you. You are not fashion. You are short and older. Your portfolio is too naked for me. Needs more clothes, needs more depth, more feeling.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

Apr 20 13 10:31 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Darren Brade wrote:
A fan of your photography work.

Thanks smile

Your work is nice, soft but also an edge to it. The only thing that is holding you bad is the lack of "real" models. You need to work with better models, get in touch with some agencies.

Yes, I would work with you.

Apr 20 13 10:34 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Nicki Micki wrote:
Okay big_smile

Your portfolio doesn't have an identity. Looking at it doesn't show me what kind of llama you are not to mention the photos look like snap shots friends took of you. Your eyes are close together, nose is big and lips are supper thin.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

Apr 20 13 10:59 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

_eMMe_ wrote:
I would love to work with you... and you? Would you work with me?

Your portfolio is lovely. You have a great body and a nice face.

I would work with you if I was to do a nude shoot with you.

Apr 20 13 11:01 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Mark Callen Photography wrote:
OK, take a look at my port and let me know :-)

Your work is over photoshopped. The lighting still needs some work as well as concepts of the shoots. Your models need better poses and expressions. Don't focus so much on the make-up/wardrobe. Get the technical stuff on point then add more things to the shoot. Start simple and increase as you get better.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

Apr 20 13 11:04 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

E_R_E_K_A wrote:
hienvy

You have a great portfolio though I do find some of your photos are over photoshopped hmm

Yes, I would work with you.

Apr 20 13 11:06 am Link

Model

Mrs Foxy

Posts: 4520

Waterford, Wisconsin, US

Do tell:)

Apr 21 13 12:02 pm Link

Photographer

Darren Brade

Posts: 3351

London, England, United Kingdom

Erlinda wrote:

Thanks smile

Your work is nice, soft but also an edge to it. The only thing that is holding you bad is the lack of "real" models. You need to work with better models, get in touch with some agencies.

Yes, I would work with you.

Thanks x

Apr 23 13 04:30 am Link

Model

Katzen Lynx

Posts: 327

Belmont, New Hampshire, US

I'll give it a shot...

Apr 23 13 06:17 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Mrs Foxy wrote:
Do tell:)

You have A LOT of photos in your portfolio which I don't think it's needed for a model. A lot of those photos bring your work done a lot... You have about 20 that are keepers and make me want to work with you soooo badly but the rest, MEH!

Yes, I would work with you but only if I was in the mood to give someone a chance. There is just too much crap that isn't needed hmm

Apr 28 13 10:35 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Katzen Lynx wrote:
I'll give it a shot...

Such a pretty girl but your portfolio doesn't to ANYTHING for you. Makes me sad!! sad

You need to start working with photographers that are GOOD! and have concepts that will show how beautiful you are. I wish you were closer.

Yes, I would work with you.

Apr 28 13 10:37 am Link

Model

_BlossomFairy_

Posts: 155

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada

would you even if I am new?

Apr 28 13 07:28 pm Link

Photographer

DLH Photo

Posts: 344

Seattle, Washington, US

Thanks ahead of time for your time and critique!

Apr 28 13 08:17 pm Link

Model

Leila Lewis

Posts: 4

Amarillo, Texas, US

Wohooo, Me

Apr 28 13 08:25 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

I'll Play...Would you work with me??
Thanks!
Mark

Apr 28 13 08:37 pm Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

_BlossomFairy_ wrote:
would you even if I am new?

You aren't the type of model I work with unless I get paid. You are short, curvy, your nose is big and your expressions are horrible... You need a lot of work, you look bored in all your photos. I understand you are new so this could change but my answer still wouldn't.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

Apr 30 13 03:39 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

DLH Photo wrote:
Thanks ahead of time for your time and critique!

Yeah, your work is okay, lightings isn't bad... You just need more of a story line to your photos then just pretty girls standing around. Need more feeling to them

I HATE your avi, there is nothing worst then having a head on shot of an elbow, looks like the model has a massive arm hmm Bad angle of the arm.

You need to work with a full team that has more creativity.

Yes, I would work with you but only if you kept begging tongue

Apr 30 13 03:42 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Leila Lewis wrote:
Wohooo, Me

Your facebook page link on your profile isn't working *check into that*

You have been on MM for two years your portfolio doesn't have a lot of work in it. There are some photos that don't really do anything for me but others that do you need to add more work that are of high quality.

Yes, I would work with you. I love how pale you are big_smile

Apr 30 13 03:45 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Mark Callen Photography wrote:
I'll Play...Would you work with me??
Thanks!
Mark

Did you forget that I already commented on whether I would work with you or not? Look up this page, you will see my answer wink

Apr 30 13 03:47 am Link

Photographer

Byron Chua

Posts: 231

Manila, National Capital Region, Philippines

smile

Apr 30 13 04:10 am Link

Model

_BlossomFairy_

Posts: 155

Saskatoon, Saskatchewan, Canada

Erlinda wrote:

You aren't the type of model I work with unless I get paid. You are short, curvy, your nose is big and your expressions are horrible... You need a lot of work, you look bored in all your photos. I understand you are new so this could change but my answer still wouldn't.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

Thank you for your honest feedback smile

Apr 30 13 05:54 am Link

Model

Jahanara

Posts: 124

Washington, District of Columbia, US

Have at it!

Apr 30 13 07:47 am Link

Retoucher

Beauty-Retoucher

Posts: 4

London, England, United Kingdom

Would love to know smile

Upps posted from the wrong profile, please check
https://www.modelmayhem.com/882588

Apr 30 13 08:19 am Link

Model

Jupiter Red

Posts: 521

New York, New York, US

Me please?

Apr 30 13 11:04 am Link

Photographer

DLH Photo

Posts: 344

Seattle, Washington, US

Erlinda wrote:

Yeah, your work is okay, lightings isn't bad... You just need more of a story line to your photos then just pretty girls standing around. Need more feeling to them

I HATE your avi, there is nothing worst then having a head on shot of an elbow, looks like the model has a massive arm hmm Bad angle of the arm.

You need to work with a full team that has more creativity.

Yes, I would work with you but only if you kept begging tongue

Thank for the critique!

I'm working on some concepts to tell a story. I am also in the planning stage to do my own editorial shoot.

Apr 30 13 11:32 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Byron Chua wrote:
smile

Your work isn't bad. There is still a lot of room to grow, lighting is fine but could always be better as well as fine tuning everything.

When it comes to shooting you want to make sure everything is at the leave you want to be seen in. For example, if you want your photos to look like they can be in portfolio books of big agency models or editorials you want to work with people that can take you to that level that includes your models.

Be more selective.

Yes, I would work with you.

May 01 13 05:20 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Chynecia De Ancariis wrote:
Have at it!

Not someone I could conceder a model or someone I would want to work with. You are short, your forehead is big (you might want to get bangs to hide it) eyes are close together and your teeth stick out.

Your portfolio looks full of snap shots that your mother or a friend took of you. It's no good.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

May 01 13 05:24 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Murad RM Retouch wrote:
Would love to know smile

Upps posted from the wrong profile, please check
https://www.modelmayhem.com/882588

Your last 3 rows bring your work down. You are good but those photos need to go.

Yes, I would work with you.

May 01 13 05:28 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

shahzaade wrote:
Me please?

Ummmmm, I don't see a model. There is something lacking and I can't seem to figure out what. All your photos in your portfolio are dark and hard to see what your natural beauty looks like. Your first 3 photos in your portfolio need to go, the blur tool has been used to the point that not even the clothes you are wearing have sharpness to them.

You really need to work on your expressions/poses as well as working with photographers that aren't so heavy and dark with their lighting/photoshop.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

May 01 13 05:32 am Link

Model

_eMMe_

Posts: 866

Florence, Toscana, Italy

Erlinda wrote:

Your portfolio is lovely. You have a great body and a nice face.

I would work with you if I was to do a nude shoot with you.

Sure I will with you, I like to pose nude with th ph I really appreciated.
I had to travel to England... to much great photographer around there.

May 02 13 08:19 am Link

Photographer

Expression Unlimited

Posts: 1408

Oceanside, California, US

I would love to know.

Unlike most who offer this MM feedback service - you have great work
and I would care about your opinion!




...Now, where is that cute icon, with the wink and tongue out...

May 02 13 08:23 am Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Expression Unlimited wrote:
I would love to know.

Unlike most who offer this MM feedback service - you have great work
and I would care about your opinion!




...Now, where is that cute icon, with the wink and tongue out...

Your work lacks in concepts and executions. The styling, poses and angles are very amateur. Not every pose has to be so extreme or exaggerated. Lighting isn't bad, just need to work on less cheesy and more put together.

No, I wouldn't work with you.

May 08 13 11:41 am Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

here i am in all my glory smile

May 08 13 01:42 pm Link

Photographer

Mark Callen Photography

Posts: 260

Buffalo, New York, US

I would love to know if you would work with me!
  Thanks!
  Mark

May 08 13 01:50 pm Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Elena Antonia Pappas wrote:
here i am in all my glory smile

Great body, nice face, love the hair...

Yes, I would work with you.

May 08 13 02:22 pm Link

Photographer

Erlinda

Posts: 7286

London, England, United Kingdom

Mark Callen Photography wrote:
I would love to know if you would work with me!
  Thanks!
  Mark

No matter how many times you ask me, my answer wont change... I already said No, I wouldn't work with you about 3 times already in this thread. I am guess you have a very short memory span hmm

May 08 13 02:23 pm Link

Model

Anna Adrielle

Posts: 18763

Antwerp, Antwerp, Belgium

I have no idea if I asked already (I don't think so, but sometimes I have the attention and memory span of a teaspoon...). but would love to know smile

May 08 13 02:36 pm Link

Model

Elena Antonia Pappas

Posts: 946

Cape Town, Western Cape, South Africa

Erlinda wrote:

Great body, nice face, love the hair...

Yes, I would work with you.

Why thank you....you not so kind to everyone,,,,good for you!!!! you re straight and to the point, I LIKE THAT smile

May 08 13 02:36 pm Link