I re-wrote your About Me just a LITTLE bit, tweaking some improper grammar and structure (sorry, It's something I love to do....) :
I would like to get into the modelling industry, preferably alternative/tattoo modelling. I'd love to get in touch with any photographers that can help me to do this. Feel free to contact me via facebook or message me on here with details of any ideas you may have that you think you could use me for.
I am new to this industry so any feedback on my portfolio would be great.
Please note: I now have a piercing to bottom left side of lip and my left forearm is now completely tattooed.
You don't have to change it at all, it's just my opinion
Now for your portfolio!
You're definitely beautiful and have a great look.
I'd personally delete this photo: http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#31868735
It's not the best quality and isn't going to attract any photographers to work with you.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#31575408
I love this photo. Strong pose and better quality than the rest of your photos.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#31445287
You have a few similar photos to that one (same concept/outfit), and I would suggest only keeping your favourite.
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#31445204
I'd also delete this one. It's pretty and sexy, but the pose is just awkward.
Overall you're off to a great start. You definitely have a look a lot of people would love to shoot. I think I sugarskull (google it
) photo shoot would work great with you and really benefit your portfolio. Or something like this:
http://bleedingears2814.files.wordpress … a215ad.jpg
would be beautiful for you to do!