Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Critiqued over 100 models and I no longer have the time to.
Model
LauraPaige
Posts: 204
Vancouver, Washington, US
Go for it! Just don't rip me apart. Hahaha.
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
LauraPaige
Posts: 204
Vancouver, Washington, US
Model
Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore
Thank you in advance 
Model
Victoria_Rose
Posts: 31
Jacksonville, Florida, US
Sure, you can critique mine!
Model
Kevin Godfrey
Posts: 1
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Hey I would like a critique please Kevin godfrey
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
Aimee LaSourire
Posts: 41
Frankfurt, Hassia, Germany
Thank you I'd appreciate your opinion! Waiting to get photos of bikini and headshots I know that's missing 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Kevin Godfrey wrote:
Hey I would like a critique please
Kevin godfrey Obviously you'll need to do more shoots and get more concepts in your portfolio, but so far you're doing great! Your a very attractive guy, and have the body for male modeling.
You need to work on your facial expressions, as they're the same in almost every photo.
There's not too much to critique because of the similar studio photos, but you definitely have potential!
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Aimee LaSourire wrote:
Thank you I'd appreciate your opinion! Waiting to get photos of bikini and headshots I know that's missing Hello fello teen model!
You're absolutely gorgeous.
This photo is my favourite:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32094749
The pose and location are beautiful. Your face could have had a bit more expression but it's still a great photo.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/p … 9#32094746
I know that's a jumping photo, but I'm not really loving it. Your legs look beautiful, but the rest of your body is just awkward.
A small critique but when you do things with your hands, you always have them in a neutral position. Try changing that up a bit.
That's all I really have to say!
Model
Hell kat
Posts: 1005
Warrington, England, United Kingdom
me please
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Deviana Fox wrote:
I'm interested! The first thing I noticed was that you need more variation in your mouth.
Also, you have a lot of photos. You should cut down on that and delete everything but what you think is your best work.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28645856
This is definitely my favourite from your port. The outfit and location works beautifully together and your legs are very elongated! Also, your pose is fantastic.
This is my least favourite:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28395238
It looks like an instagram photo, not a modeling photo.
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Hell kat wrote:
me please You have a very cute and pretty, yet fashionably versatile look!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28654497
This photo is probably my favourite. It's clearly a very happy photo, and your pose and expression look beautiful yet a bit sexy.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19629534
This one is probably my least favourite. Your facial expression doesn't work with the way you're angling it, making it look awkward and a bit creepy.
Your portfolio is very versatile and I love that! It definitely caught my eye!
Model
Robyan
Posts: 236
Quincy, Illinois, US
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D A N I
Posts: 4627
Little Rock, Arkansas, US
Model
Zoe Chanel
Posts: 164
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia
Would love to know
Model
Polly Anther
Posts: 53
Leicester, England, United Kingdom
Please, critique on my actual look would be interesting!
Photographer
ArtisticallySexy
Posts: 100
Atlanta, Georgia, US
If you are doing the same with photographers I would love to hear your opinion.
Thanks, John
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Polly Anther wrote:
Please, critique on my actual look would be interesting! Just your look? Hm, Okay!
Your hairstyle/color makes you able to look pretty and pure, but also sexy which shows great versatility, and you'll be able to do many different concepts that work for you. I think you need to work a little bit more on toning your upper arms, but you definitely have a beautiful body.
Model
Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US
Let me know what you think!
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
JohnsPhotos wrote:
If you are doing the same with photographers I would love to hear your opinion.
Thanks, John I prefer not to, because I can only see things from a model's point of view, and can't offer much constructive criticism since I don't have much experience with actual photography.
I do like your port though. My only suggestion would be work on your photo-shop techniques. You have some beautiful photos!
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Mary Zdo wrote:
Let me know what you think! I'm blown away by your portfolio! You're doing amazing, and have such a good look for the business.
My only suggestion would be to delete this photo:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31743178
It's pretty, but looks more like a Facebook profile picture than something that belongs in a llama portfolio.
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Seneca Art wrote:
Me? You have a FANTASTIC body for nude modeling. Your poses are perfection and you definitely know your angles. I'd suggest doing more in color, since the majority of your photos are black and white.
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30844028
This photo is my favourite. You look so tranquil and pretty, not overly sexy like in some nudes.
Model
Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US
Meghan Hale wrote:
I'm blown away by your portfolio! You're doing amazing, and have such a good look for the business.
My only suggestion would be to delete this photo:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31743178
It's pretty, but looks more like a Facebook profile picture than something that belongs in a model portfolio. Thank you so much for the kind words! (: Same can be said for you - your portfolio is already awesome, especially for someone so young! Love the new shots especially. You're definitely going to do well.
You're right, that photo is a bit snapshotty. I'll get rid of it soon when I get new photos to fill the space. Although I feel like I might have too many already. Hmm.
Model
LeighN
Posts: 224
Frederick, Maryland, US
im scared lol but go ahead!
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Model
LeighN
Posts: 224
Frederick, Maryland, US
Meghan Hale wrote:
Don't be scared, I don't bite! And I love critiquing other teen girl's portfolios!
First of all I'm not a huge fan of the screen shot Instagram pictures. Just right in the caption that that's what it is.
I also don't like this photo very much:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32094404
It seems amateur, especially compared to your other amazing photos.
I absolutely LOVE these:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32110620
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32188370
You have such a beautiful face and have so much potential in the future! Awee well thank you! Just to let you know (i need to add that in the caption now...) the insta photos ARE NOT of me they are pictures I want to recreate and wanted to add them to my lists bc i didnt know a better way to list them...
i agree with completely with the critique of the snow picture and ive let my other less professional photos go but I hate to let that one go because of how many compliments i get on the uniqueness lol so you win some you lose some i guess i think id like to try it over again though and get a better pic of myself
surprisingly the photographer that shot the snow pic and the one of me in the coral dress are one in the same!
Model
MatureModelMM
Posts: 2843
Detroit, Michigan, US
Please, and thank you!! Your critiques are simply wonderful. What do you think of a model old enough to be your grandmother?
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
MatureModelMM wrote:
Please, and thank you!! Your critiques are simply wonderful. What do you think of a model old enough to be your grandmother? Well you'd be an awfully good looking grandmother!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27800803
This photo is so strong and powerful, and you did a great job executing your part.
And you have such an amazing body for someone who's not the typical age for a nude model!
Model
MatureModelMM
Posts: 2843
Detroit, Michigan, US
Meghan Hale wrote:
Well you'd be an awfully good looking grandmother!
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27800803
This photo is so strong and powerful, and you did a great job executing your part.
And you have such an amazing body for someone who's not the typical age for a nude model! Thank you so much! I still have a lot of fun modelling in the nude, and no plans to ever stop as long as there are artists and photographers who want to work with me.
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 866
Florence, Toscana, Italy
I'll be glad to receive any tips!
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Mississauga, Ontario, Canada
Rachael Bueckert wrote:
I would love it I critiqued you in your own forum posting, and said this:
My only suggestion would be that if I were you, I`d delete this photo:
https://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30154814
It`s pretty but not focused or detailed, and the photograpy isn't beneficial to your portfolio.
Other than that, your portfolio is seriously stunning! If I were a photographer, I'd work with you in a heartbeat!
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