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Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Critiqued over 100 models and I no longer have the time to.
Apr 01 13 03:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
LauraPaige
Posts: 204
Greenville, North Carolina, US


Go for it! Just don't rip me apart. Hahaha.
Apr 01 13 03:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


LauraPaige wrote:
Go for it! Just don't rip me apart. Hahaha.

I absolutely love this photo:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15204485
The pose and the expression work great together, and you look beautiful.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#21952325
These pictures are stylish and cool, but your expressions seem kind of dead. Not my favourite.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#29418699
Your body looks fantastic in this, but your expression doesn't seem to be interacting at all.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#32021673
This one just feels a little awkward. Probably my least favourite in your port.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31604859
LOVE your face in this one!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31848705
Good connection with the concept and other model!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31848678
This one's so awesome, your eyes are fabulous!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31466511
This one looks like a behind the scenes photo, to be honest...

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#29135963
Probably my favourite!

I actually really like a majority of your photos. I think you have a lot more potential and are doing great so far! Your facial expressions are wonderful!

Apr 01 13 04:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
LauraPaige
Posts: 204
Greenville, North Carolina, US


Meghan Hale wrote:

I absolutely love this photo:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/15204485
The pose and the expression work great together, and you look beautiful.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#21952325
These pictures are stylish and cool, but your expressions seem kind of dead. Not my favourite.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#29418699
Your body looks fantastic in this, but your expression doesn't seem to be interacting at all.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#32021673
This one just feels a little awkward. Probably my least favourite in your port.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31604859
LOVE your face in this one!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31848705
Good connection with the concept and other model!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31848678
This one's so awesome, your eyes are fabulous!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#31466511
This one looks like a behind the scenes photo, to be honest...

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 5#29135963
Probably my favourite!

I actually really like a majority of your photos. I think you have a lot more potential and are doing great so far! Your facial expressions are wonderful!

The pinup one, I wish I could remove the middle pic. & The 'behind the scenes' one... yeah, I can see that. Idk. Might remove that one eventually.

Thank you for the critique! smile I'm trying, lol.

Apr 01 13 04:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Jhomel
Posts: 180
Singapore, Singapore, Singapore


Thank you in advance smilesmile
Apr 01 13 04:22 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Victoria_Rose
Posts: 31
Jacksonville, Florida, US


Sure, you can critique mine!  smile
Apr 01 13 04:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Kevin Godfrey
Posts: 1
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Hey I would like a critique please smile

Kevin godfrey
Apr 01 13 04:45 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Jhomel wrote:
Thank you in advance smilesmile

For just starting out you're doing pretty good!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32009758
This photo is one I like, but probably my least favourite of your portfolio. Your face looks spectacular but as a model you should always "find the light" and in this case it should have been hitting your face more.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31995273
This is my favourite. It shows off your body perfectly.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 3#32106267
This is another favourite. Your pose is perfect as well as your expression.

Like I said, you're off to a wonderful start! I'd try to get more conceptual shoots in your portfolio though.

Apr 01 13 04:46 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Aimee LaSourire
Posts: 41
Heilbronn, Baden-W├╝rttemberg, Germany


Thank you I'd appreciate your opinion! Waiting to get photos of bikini and headshots I know that's missing wink
Apr 01 13 04:54 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Carrington Shaw wrote:
Sure, you can critique mine!  smile

You have a very pretty and versatile look!

When you do shoots you should only add one or two photos with the same look in your portfolio. There are a few where you have the exact same concept and outfit, just a different pose. I'd pick your favourite and delete the others.

I don't like these photos especially:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29322129
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/29322148
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30090281
Due to unflattering lighting and awkward posing.

I really like this one:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30021419
The photography isn't the strongest but that's not your fault. Your pose and expression is wonderful!

Apr 01 13 04:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Deviana Fox
Posts: 273
Washington, District of Columbia, US


I'm interested!
Apr 01 13 05:00 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Kevin Godfrey wrote:
Hey I would like a critique please smile

Kevin godfrey

Obviously you'll need to do more shoots and get more concepts in your portfolio, but so far you're doing great! Your a very attractive guy, and have the body for male modeling.

You need to work on your facial expressions, as they're the same in almost every photo.

There's not too much to critique because of the similar studio photos, but you definitely have potential!

Apr 01 13 05:01 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Aimee LaSourire wrote:
Thank you I'd appreciate your opinion! Waiting to get photos of bikini and headshots I know that's missing wink

Hello fello teen model!

You're absolutely gorgeous.

This photo is my favourite:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32094749
The pose and location are beautiful. Your face could have had a bit more expression but it's still a great photo.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 9#32094746
I know that's a jumping photo, but I'm not really loving it. Your legs look beautiful, but the rest of your body is just awkward.

A small critique but when you do things with your hands, you always have them in a neutral position. Try changing that up a bit.

That's all I really have to say! smile

Apr 01 13 05:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Hell kat
Posts: 1,005
Warrington, England, United Kingdom


me please smile
Apr 01 13 05:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Deviana Fox wrote:
I'm interested!

The first thing I noticed was that you need more variation in your mouth.

Also, you have a lot of photos. You should cut down on that and delete everything but what you think is your best work.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28645856
This is definitely my favourite from your port. The outfit and location works beautifully together and your legs are very elongated! Also, your pose is fantastic.

This is my least favourite:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28395238
It looks like an instagram photo, not a modeling photo.

Apr 01 13 05:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Hell kat wrote:
me please smile

You have a very cute and pretty, yet fashionably versatile look!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/28654497
This photo is probably my favourite. It's clearly a very happy photo, and your pose and expression look beautiful yet a bit sexy.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/19629534
This one is probably my least favourite. Your facial expression doesn't work with the way you're angling it, making it look awkward and a bit creepy.

Your portfolio is very versatile and I love that! It definitely caught my eye!

Apr 01 13 05:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Robyan
Posts: 236
Quincy, Illinois, US


?
Apr 02 13 12:01 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Danielle Reid
Posts: 4,101
Miami, Florida, US


Sure why not
Apr 02 13 12:19 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Zoe Chanel
Posts: 164
Sydney, New South Wales, Australia


Would love to know smile
Apr 02 13 03:04 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Polly Anther
Posts: 53
Darlington, England, United Kingdom


Please, critique on my actual look would be interesting!
Apr 02 13 06:15 am  Link  Quote 
Photographer
ArtisticallySexy
Posts: 100
Coconut Creek, Florida, US


If you are doing the same with photographers I would love to hear your opinion.
Thanks, John
Apr 02 13 07:30 am  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Robyan wrote:
?

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31046898
I really like this picture. You did a great job with connecting your pose to your expression.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#31046886
This photo does't really say "model". It's more of a shot you'd see on Facebook.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#30555522
Should be deleted. Looks like it's an Instagram picture.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#28868211
Very pretty! It shows your versatility.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 8#28860372
Your legs are too far apart making them look awkward. But other than that, it's a great photo.

You're a very pretty and versatile model, which is shown well throughout your portfolio!

Apr 02 13 12:07 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Danielle Reid wrote:
Sure why not

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 6#32167286
Beautifully done, it shows your body well.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 6#32095860
I like the overall photo, but your arm that's touching your face is squeezing in your breast, making it look pretty silly and unflattering.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 6#32026303
Your skin blends in with the couch too much. Try not to make that mistake again.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 6#30565989
Definitely your best photo! You look beautiful.

You have plenty more potential, and I'd suggest working with only the best photographers to improve!

Apr 02 13 12:10 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Zoe Chanel wrote:
Would love to know smile

Before even looking at your page I was excited, because your main image is so beautiful. It makes me want to see more!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 7#31045707
This pose kind of just makes you look dead. Not loving it.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 7#30312725
Very good angle of you!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 7#29669215
This photo is absolutely breath-taking.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pi … 7#29073673
This photo is bad quality and brings down the overall good image of your portfolio. I'd suggest deleting it.

You're SO beautiful, and I love your look.  Try and do more conceptual shots involving hair and makeup to show your versatility.

Apr 02 13 12:14 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Polly Anther wrote:
Please, critique on my actual look would be interesting!

Just your look? Hm, Okay!

Your hairstyle/color makes you able to look pretty and pure, but also sexy which shows great versatility, and you'll be able to do many different concepts that work for you. I think you need to work a little bit more on toning your upper arms, but you definitely have a beautiful body.

Apr 02 13 12:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US


Let me know what you think!
Apr 02 13 12:16 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Seneca Thompson
Posts: 55
Anaheim, California, US


Me?smile
Apr 02 13 12:17 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


JohnsPhotos wrote:
If you are doing the same with photographers I would love to hear your opinion.
Thanks, John

I prefer not to, because I can only see things from a model's point of view, and can't offer much constructive criticism since I don't have much experience with actual photography.

I do like your port though. My only suggestion would be work on your photo-shop techniques. You have some beautiful photos!

Apr 02 13 12:18 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Mary Zdo wrote:
Let me know what you think!

I'm blown away by your portfolio! You're doing amazing, and have such a good look for the business.

My only suggestion would be to delete this photo:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31743178
It's pretty, but looks more like a Facebook profile picture than something that belongs in a llama portfolio.

Apr 02 13 12:19 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Seneca Art wrote:
Me?smile

You have a FANTASTIC body for nude modeling. Your poses are perfection and you definitely know your angles. I'd suggest doing more in color, since the majority of your photos are black and white.

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30844028
This photo is my favourite. You look so tranquil and pretty, not overly sexy like in some nudes.

Apr 02 13 12:21 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Mary Zdo
Posts: 176
San Ramon, California, US


Meghan Hale wrote:
I'm blown away by your portfolio! You're doing amazing, and have such a good look for the business.

My only suggestion would be to delete this photo:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/31743178
It's pretty, but looks more like a Facebook profile picture than something that belongs in a model portfolio.

Thank you so much for the kind words! (: Same can be said for you - your portfolio is already awesome, especially for someone so young! Love the new shots especially. You're definitely going to do well.

You're right, that photo is a bit snapshotty. I'll get rid of it soon when I get new photos to fill the space. Although I feel like I might have too many already. Hmm.

Apr 02 13 12:53 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
LeighN
Posts: 224
Frederick, Maryland, US


im scared lol but go ahead!
Apr 02 13 01:20 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


LeighN wrote:
im scared lol but go ahead!

Don't be scared, I don't bite! smile And I love critiquing other teen girl's portfolios! smile

First of all I'm not a huge fan of the screen shot Instagram pictures. Just right in the caption that that's what it is.

I also don't like this photo very much:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32094404
It seems amateur, especially compared to your other amazing photos.

I absolutely LOVE these:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32110620
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32188370

You have such a beautiful face and have so much potential in the future!

Apr 02 13 01:37 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
LeighN
Posts: 224
Frederick, Maryland, US


Meghan Hale wrote:

Don't be scared, I don't bite! smile And I love critiquing other teen girl's portfolios! smile

First of all I'm not a huge fan of the screen shot Instagram pictures. Just right in the caption that that's what it is.

I also don't like this photo very much:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32094404
It seems amateur, especially compared to your other amazing photos.

I absolutely LOVE these:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32110620
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/32188370

You have such a beautiful face and have so much potential in the future!

Awee well thank you! Just to let you know (i need to add that in the caption now...) the insta photos ARE NOT of me they are pictures I want to recreate and wanted to add them to my lists bc i didnt know a better way to list them...

i agree with completely with the critique of the snow picture and ive let my other less professional photos go but I hate to let that one go because of how many compliments i get on the uniqueness lol so you win some you lose some i guess i think id like to try it over again though and get a better pic of myself

surprisingly the photographer that shot the snow pic and the one of me in the coral dress are one in the same!

Apr 02 13 01:50 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MatureModelMM
Posts: 1,002
Detroit, Michigan, US


Please, and thank you!! smile  Your critiques are simply wonderful. What do you think of a model old enough to be your grandmother?
Apr 02 13 01:58 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


MatureModelMM wrote:
Please, and thank you!! smile  Your critiques are simply wonderful. What do you think of a model old enough to be your grandmother?

Well you'd be an awfully good looking grandmother!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27800803
This photo is so strong and powerful, and you did a great job executing your part.

And you have such an amazing body for someone who's not the typical age for a nude model!

Apr 02 13 02:27 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
MatureModelMM
Posts: 1,002
Detroit, Michigan, US


Meghan Hale wrote:

Well you'd be an awfully good looking grandmother!

http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/27800803
This photo is so strong and powerful, and you did a great job executing your part.

And you have such an amazing body for someone who's not the typical age for a nude model!

Thank you so much!  I still have a lot of fun modelling in the nude, and no plans to ever stop as long as there are artists and photographers who want to work with me.

Apr 02 13 02:36 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Rachael Bueckert
Posts: 1,121
Red Deer, Alberta, Canada


I would love it smile
Apr 02 13 03:04 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
_eMMe_
Posts: 842
Florence, Toscana, Italy


I'll be glad to receive any tips!
Apr 02 13 03:05 pm  Link  Quote 
Model
Meghan Hale
Posts: 335
Halifax, Nova Scotia, Canada


Rachael Bueckert wrote:
I would love it smile

I critiqued you in your own forum posting, and said this:

My only suggestion would be that if I were you, I`d delete this photo:
http://www.modelmayhem.com/portfolio/pic/30154814
It`s pretty but not focused or detailed, and the photograpy isn't beneficial to your portfolio.

Other than that, your portfolio is seriously stunning! If I were a photographer, I'd work with you in a heartbeat!

Apr 02 13 04:06 pm  Link  Quote 
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