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J_Florentino
Posts: 18
Los Angeles, California, US


I got new pics. any critique will help me out, please and thank you smile
Let me know what works, doesn't Thanks in advance.
Apr 09 13 09:58 am  Link  Quote 
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Perceptive Portraits
Posts: 237
North Salt Lake, Utah, US


The first three images (pink tunic, blue shirt on a pedestal, white pants) are snapshot quality. While poses are fine, the lighting is terrible. Compared to the other images in your portfolio, which aren't bad, they suffer. I'd take them out.

And this one, to me, is...indescribably weird. That's not necessarily a bad thing.

http://photos.modelmayhem.com/photos/130409/09/516447b18aa6f_m.jpg

I hope this helps.
Apr 24 13 09:34 pm  Link  Quote 
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